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    Missing. 8

    Story written on February 4, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Closer….no hesitation.

     

     

    “No young one. Now stay the night and be on your way…I feel the need you have to finish a task and I wont keep from you from it.”

     

     

     

    We all stand at the same time. I follow Carmen out of the hut. The sky cracks open and rivers of rain pelt us as we run to our hut. We slam the door as a huge gust of wind hits us. Carmen is soaking wet and I am soaking wet. I feel lighter than I have since I was a kid. It’s an amazing thing when you don’t feel the weight of your messed up world crushing you.

     

     

     

    “Shane?”

     

     

     

    “No Carmen…lets cut the conversation……we need each other….so stop running from me. I am not damaged or broken…and if you don’t let me get near you. In you….something really bad is going to happen.”

     

     

     

    “I….”

     

     

     

    No more words as I pull her to me. No more words as I open her mouth with my tongue. The only sounds coming from Carmen are sighs and moans and tasting. Its fast when she takes her wet clothes off. Its fast when she takes mine off. Her hands trace slow patterns on my body as we slip father down and away from the world.  With my back on the soft earth beneath us I feel a little bit crazy when she kisses my shoulder. I feel a little bit crazy when her teeth graze my nipples. I feel her getting crazy when my fingers circle her back. That feel of her hair as she kisses her way to my hips, her lips have all the power when they kiss my thighs, my hands don’t know where to go or what to do when she spreads my legs, when her lips touch me, and her tongue darts in and out. Over and under, my toes curl. I want to say oh god. I want to scream and shout Carmen’s name. I want to tell her how bad I need to come. I do. But I can’t say a word. I bite my own hand my own fingers it feels that good, I can’t say anything. I moan and moan and moan. My body snaps like it was being pulled way too tight.

     

     

     

     

     

    TBC…

     

     

    Featured Song: This Time By The Verve.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    1. Shane seems to be coming to a realization about herself while Carmen seems to be slightly falling apart. The call to Marco was sweet. Really are happy that you gave us the warning about your stories ending. You’ll def. be missed.

    2. godddddddd yoou are making thing worse by gicing us a great fucking update… haha i willl fucking miss you everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but yea lifes like that …. anyways loved the update but i’m scared of whats next…

    3. I know I haven’t written in awhile. Life has been keeping me on my toes and keeping me from your wonderful stories. I’m really sad to hear that you are going to stop soon, but I got to read some of the best writing I’ve seen, and I will be able to keep that forever. I will really miss the world you created, and the hotness that is Sharmen. I’m honored that you call me your original fan, and for telling me that my comment so long ago made you think about this story and finally post it (that truely made me happier than you know). It’s been a wild ride, and for all our sakes, I hope you’ll change your mind and dream up another fantastic Sharmen adventure! I know this isn’t goodbye, and honestly I don’t know why I’m being so melodramatic. Anyway, until next time…

    5. so glad you are back. i’ve not missed any of your stories. actually, i am not good to crit or advise even admire. but you know what you’ve made my day and night. thanks you sweetie!

    6. This is one of the best updates yet! Knowing that it may be close to the last one is hard to swallow, but it has been a joy reading this saga! I hope Carmen and Shane get what they have been fighting for all along; a happy ending with their little boy!

    7. Wowza! What a way to end a chapter, there. I’m still wrapping my head around the fact that this story will end. :( Sad times, sad times. So this update, like your previous one, was bittersweet. Of course it was a great couple chapters, but knowing that they’re one of the last few kind of dampens the spirits. Sad times. But enough of that! I wish you luck on the awards, because you honestly deserve it (you got my vote in a few places).

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