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    Missing. 8

    Story written on February 4, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Closer….no hesitation.

     

     

    I take her hand and we walk to the beach and watch the waves and the sky. Its the violent crash of the waves it makes me want to be near her….I pull Carmen close me. Rough the feel of her body and mine together. We fit so perfectly. Nothing is wasted. Her hands in my hair pulling me impossibly closer to her. My hands in her hair getting there with her. Our lips, our tongues perfect. Her breasts against mine, her hands moving from my neck to my back…. lower and lower. Still perfect. The wind making us inch closer to each other, it comes on strong the need to be a part of her. It comes on strong that insane want of her. It comes on strong the loud sound of my blood roaring in my ears. I know it is the same for her. I know she doesn’t want to let me go. And I know that she doesn’t want to come back. And I know worst of all that she is over come by this emotion. She sees me as an injured thing…broken from the inside. Broken from my mind that tends to play to tricks on me. I know all of this. But I am not broken. Not in any way. I am instead overcome by her. Her swiftness. Her fear to not want to break me only makes me want to let her.

     

     

     

    “Not now….” She says. “Shane please….”

     

     

    “You know I am not broken Carmen.”

     

     

    “I know Shane….I know….I just can’t right now…”

     

     

    “I know you can…..I can feel it….you are so hot right now…..burning up……”

     

     

    ‘Please Shane….I just can’t…”

     

     

    “Alright…lets go find the old man…..you can’t keep running from me Carmen…”

     

     

    “I am not running. I just can’t right now…”

     

     

    Almost like a cruel joke the shaman appears. He seems happy and we follow him wordlessly back to his hut. We eat in silence when we get to his hut. Carmen says nothing. She just stares off into nothing. So I open the discussion.

     

     

    “I have come to terms with the choice I made.”

     

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    1. Shane seems to be coming to a realization about herself while Carmen seems to be slightly falling apart. The call to Marco was sweet. Really are happy that you gave us the warning about your stories ending. You’ll def. be missed.

    2. godddddddd yoou are making thing worse by gicing us a great fucking update… haha i willl fucking miss you everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but yea lifes like that …. anyways loved the update but i’m scared of whats next…

    3. I know I haven’t written in awhile. Life has been keeping me on my toes and keeping me from your wonderful stories. I’m really sad to hear that you are going to stop soon, but I got to read some of the best writing I’ve seen, and I will be able to keep that forever. I will really miss the world you created, and the hotness that is Sharmen. I’m honored that you call me your original fan, and for telling me that my comment so long ago made you think about this story and finally post it (that truely made me happier than you know). It’s been a wild ride, and for all our sakes, I hope you’ll change your mind and dream up another fantastic Sharmen adventure! I know this isn’t goodbye, and honestly I don’t know why I’m being so melodramatic. Anyway, until next time…

    5. so glad you are back. i’ve not missed any of your stories. actually, i am not good to crit or advise even admire. but you know what you’ve made my day and night. thanks you sweetie!

    6. This is one of the best updates yet! Knowing that it may be close to the last one is hard to swallow, but it has been a joy reading this saga! I hope Carmen and Shane get what they have been fighting for all along; a happy ending with their little boy!

    7. Wowza! What a way to end a chapter, there. I’m still wrapping my head around the fact that this story will end. :( Sad times, sad times. So this update, like your previous one, was bittersweet. Of course it was a great couple chapters, but knowing that they’re one of the last few kind of dampens the spirits. Sad times. But enough of that! I wish you luck on the awards, because you honestly deserve it (you got my vote in a few places).

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