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More Than a Feeling
Oh, crap, I didnt even know it was gone! Tina exclaimed, reaching into the car to retrieve the phone. Thanks so much. The last thing I need is to tell my mother that on top of getting into a fight, I also lost my brand new phone.
Not a problem. Okay, so
Yeah, Ill see you. Tina backed away from Bettes car and Bette honked as she pulled from the curb. Shoving a hand in her back pocket, Tina waved Bette off, standing until Bette was out of sight. Then, she turned and looked at her house, wondering what her mother would have in store for her.
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Sharon pulled up to the curb and unlocked the door. I have to pick up your fathers dry cleaning, but we will talk when I get home, understand?
Yes Mom. Dana replied, trying her best to sound somber. Truthfully, she couldnt have been happier. Tina was her friend again and her secret was safe, she only got detention for one day and she wasnt going to get kicked off the tennis team. Life was pretty damn good at the momentbut Dana couldnt let Sharon know that. She opened the car door, frowning at her mother one last time before getting out.
Sharon raised a threatening eyebrow at her daughter. And when I come home, I want to find you upstairs doing your homework. Is that clear?
Yes Mom. Dana repeated, slinging her backpack over her shoulder.
Sharon nodded, her job done, and then slowly pulled away. Dana sighed as she turned and started up the walkway to her house. Surely, the principal had told them that Dana got into a fight, it was just up to Dana to fill it in with whatever he failed to mention. The punishment, hopefully, wouldnt be too severe. As Dana thought about what she was going to say, a figure jumped from the bushes directly in front of the sporty brunette.
Dana jumped and screamed, completely surprised, and then realized it was only Alice. Holy shit Alice! Dana shouted, putting a hand over her heart and closing her eyes. You scared me half to death!
Im sorry. Alice said, But you need to listen to what I have to say. Now I know that I shouldnt have called you out like that but sometimes my mouth just starts going without my minds permission
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(48 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
thanks for this. post more soon please, come friday night quick :D
Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.
interesting indeed cant wait
Nice story! Very curious what friday night will bring. :D
This story is so good. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Awww… They are so cute and young! lol.. Bring it on! Love it
Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.
Bring on friday night!! love it, plz continue, i need another dose of a great story.
I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.
Indeed, bring on friday night! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, just some B&T loving would be great ;), Post soon please!
OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk
Please let friday night come fast LOL… Great update.. i love this story!
this is my first time comment but have been reading every chapter. I have to say that I am really enjoying this story.
Hey glad u found time to post a new chapter, can’t wait for friday’s date post soon.
“this is just the product of learning Dana, Bette and Alice are gay. You feel left out.”This made me laugh.
I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.
oh, i can’t wait for friday night..post sooner though, like tomorrow…can’t wait for B&T to connect more….it’s so exciting
I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!
Glad everything turn out good and can’t wait to see Friday. Ok post soon please, thanks!
And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?†LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.