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    More Than a Feeling

    Story written on March 22, 2006 by Manda L..
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    Chapter 13: “Long Story” is the phrase of the day.

    Al–

    And Tina had nothing to do with it because I just knew.

    Al–

    And yes she told Bette but really, its a big secret and she couldnt keep it all to herself and Bette didnt tell me I swear. Bette knows how to keep a secret, her lips are sealed like a ziplock bag

    Alice.

    So you cant keep punishing Tina because shes just so miserable and I promised Id fix it and I have to so–

    ALICE! Dana shouted, shaking Alice by her shoulders, prompting the girl to stop talking. Dana only shook her head and laughed. Its all right. Tina and I talked today. Everythings fine.

    Yeah? Alice asked, her voice high-pitched in hope.

    Yes. So take a breath.

    Alice nodded, heaving a deep sigh. Her whole body relaxed as she breathed, feeling relief wash over her. Then, she looked at Dana. You know, Ive been in those bushes for over an hour. Where were you?

    Its a long story that Id love to share but I have to go inside. Im kinda grounded.

    For what?

    Thats part of the long story. Dana waved it off. Call me tonight and Ill tell you all about it. Or, Tinas probably told Bette already so you can hear it from her. Whatever.

    Oh, so now Im outta the loop? Im a reporter, I should be in the loop at all times! I should be in several loops all at once, at all times!

    Dana only gave Alices shoulder a squeeze, shaking her head. Ill see you later, okay?

    All right. Alice said, turning to watch Dana go inside. So, everythings really okay?

    Yeah. Dana nodded, and smiled the biggest smile Alice had ever seen.

    Alice breathed another sigh of relief. Glad thats over. Good. Ill see you tomorrow.

    Then, Dana went inside. Alice immediately took out her phone and began to dial, tapping her foot as she waited for an answer.

    Alice– Bette began, but was cut off.

    What exactly went on today and why didnt I know about it?

    Its a long story.

    Well, how about we start from the beginning then?

    —————————

    That night, after a serious talking-to from her parents, Dana went upstairs and called Tina. They talked for a few hours about everything, like what Tina, Bette, and Alice did and how miserable Tina was the whole time. They also talked about Eric and his ever-persistent pursuit of Tina. They also talked about how Dana had lost one match, but won two matches and had a big party at her house, but was miserable too. Then, they got down to the good stuff.

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    2. Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.

    7. Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.

    9. I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.

    11. OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk

    16. I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.

    18. I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!

    20. And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?” LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.

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