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More Than a Feeling
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Hey Tina, can I ask you a question?
Shoot.
Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?
Silence.
Tina? Tina are you there?
Uhwha Tina trailed off, clearing her throat. What makes you say that?
I dont know. Its the way she is around you. The way she looks at youthe whole thing. It seems like shes into you.
Hmm, I never really noticed. Tina said, trying to sound nonchalant. She quickly changed the subject. What about Alice? Shes into you.
Do you think Alice really likes me?
Tina chuckled a little. The thing about Alice is that she likes everybody.
Thats nice to hear. Dana mumbled, disheartened.
Tina laughed. No, but I think she really, really likes you. You should go out with her.
Dana scoffed. Yeah right. Where would we go? I cant be seen in public on a date with a girl.
You could always just go over to Alices–
Stop that thought right there.
Why? Alices mother knows shes bi, whats the big deal?
Yeah, and all I need is for her mother to run into my mother in the grocery store, or the mall, or bridge clubwhereverand tell her all about me.
You sure have put a lot of thought into stopping yourself from having a good time, havent you?
Hey, its not something Im proud of.
Well, well think of something.
Wait, who says I want to think of anything?
Dana.
Dana sighed. Okayso I dough, what am I gonna do?
Dont worry, we’ll figure it out, we always do.
All right.
Good. So, Ill see you tomorrow.
All right. Later!
Bye. Tina hung up.
A few minutes later, Danas phone rang. Wow, did you think of something already? Dana picked it up. Hello?
Hey, Danaits Alice.
Ohhey.
Hilisten, I know the whole thing is over and done with, but I still wanted to apologize for the way I acted that Friday. I came on a little too strong and Im sorry.
I accept your apology.
Okay Alice said.
There was dead silence on the phone for a few seconds after that, but it seemed like hours. Dana knew there was more to this conversation than just an apology, she was just waiting for the other shoe to drop. With that waiting, though, came an intense fluttering in her stomach.
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thanks for this. post more soon please, come friday night quick :D
Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.
interesting indeed cant wait
Nice story! Very curious what friday night will bring. :D
This story is so good. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Awww… They are so cute and young! lol.. Bring it on! Love it
Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.
Bring on friday night!! love it, plz continue, i need another dose of a great story.
I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.
Indeed, bring on friday night! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, just some B&T loving would be great ;), Post soon please!
OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk
Please let friday night come fast LOL… Great update.. i love this story!
this is my first time comment but have been reading every chapter. I have to say that I am really enjoying this story.
Hey glad u found time to post a new chapter, can’t wait for friday’s date post soon.
“this is just the product of learning Dana, Bette and Alice are gay. You feel left out.”This made me laugh.
I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.
oh, i can’t wait for friday night..post sooner though, like tomorrow…can’t wait for B&T to connect more….it’s so exciting
I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!
Glad everything turn out good and can’t wait to see Friday. Ok post soon please, thanks!
And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?†LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.