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More Than a Feeling
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Bette just rolled her eyes and hit Tina with one of the couch pillows. Tina laughed, throwing the pillow back at Bette, just as the doorbell rang. "Oh, I’ll get it!" Tina said, jumping up from the couch. Bette watched her go, glad that she seemed happier than just a short while before. At least you brighten her day. Bette thought, smiling to herself.
Tina opened the door, still laughing, but then stopped. "What are you doing here?"
Presenting her with a bouquet of flowers, Eric semi-bowed and said, "What, I can’t stop by and say, ‘hello?’"
Hearing his voice made the bile rise in Bette’s throat. Jesus Fucking Christ. Just when I’m starting to enjoy myself… Bette stood, making sure her keys were in her pocket. She wasn’t going to stick around and let him make a fool out of her. Wait! That would leave Tina alone in the house with him. You can’t leave! "Shit."
"Well, yeah, but I really wish you would call before stopping by to say ‘hello.’ I’m a wreck." Tina said, picking at her shirt to emphasize her point.
"I think you look great." Eric said. "So, are you going to take the flowers and let me in, or are we going to stand here on the front step?"
Rolling her eyes, Tina took the flowers and stepped aside, letting Eric in. "They’re beautiful Romeo, thank you." Eric had his back to the living room, never noticing Bette, but Tina did as he leaned in for a kiss. Very conscious of the other presence in the house, Tina just gave him a quick peck on the lips before pulling away. "Uh, Eric, do you know Bette Porter?" Tina pointed behind Eric, who spun around quickly in surprise.
"Well hello Porter."
"Monty." Bette said flatly, crossing her arms as she stared at him with great disdain.
"I’m going to go put these in a vase. I’ll be right back." Tina said, leaving Eric and Bette alone.
Once he was sure Tina was out of earshot, Eric’s face twisted in disgust. "What the hell are you doing here?" He practically spat.
"Ever the polite, kind, friendly soul aren’t we Monty?"
"Still the tightass ice bitch, I see."
Bette just scoffed as she resumed her seat on the couch. "Still the soulless man-whore you always were."
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Great Chapter, What’s up between Bette and Monty? Post Soon
lol yeah, why does Tina desperately wants to know everything about Bette huh? hmm oh well i don’t knowww, maybe because this is another B&T beginning lol
Eric such an ass and glad Tina trust Bette and not going out with Monty. Oh Tina want to know everything about Bette, this gonna be good, and what’s happen between Bette and Monty. OK post soon please, thanks!
exactly was lamentamini said…eric tried bette n she dissed him!! so sad monty so sad!
Ice bitch huh. I bet asshole Eric tried to score with Bette and she shot him down. Maybe while Bette is flipping through the channels a movie wit a couple of hot women will be on and Bette can gauge Tina’s reaction. ;)
Holy hell I needed this chapter to pull me out of the trenches from Sunday’s episode. Why am I even watching when I can just live happily in Fan Fiction Denialville? Manda, your story is excellent and again, I thank you for writing it at a time when it’s situation critical. As for Bette, woman up and go get your girl. Parting is such sweet sorrow, Monty! PLEASE post soon if life allows Manda.
My friend introduced me to this story of yours.. It’s great!!! I just totally love the way you are writing B&T.. and Alice she is a riot! hahaha.. I really hope everything is going to be aright with Dana. Can’t wait to see B&T’s first kiss *wink*.. hahaha.. Great work! Next Chapter Please :)
This was great, and your dialogue is very good!! Thanks!
Wow, Tina is very trusting… Hope it doesn’t get her in trouble… Thanks for writing it!
i can answer this for you, tina: because you like her more than a friend….love this chapter, at least tina isn’t mad at bette…i’m glad tina heard it all…and his nickname reminds me of full monty LOL
Love it. Please post soon
very good chapter, i am glad Tina wasn`t mad with Bette, she trust her. i hope she won`t go out wiht Monty! keep posting you are doing great! thanks for happy times for B&T
haha Eric lft disapointed that makes me happie :) hmm..so Bette&Monty have a past hay..that bloke BAD newz..he can shag&bag ne babe y mst he have his peker set on Tina..no sprks..he aint wrth it..T knew of his rep b4Bette even called Romeo a man-whore..I jus no get this..yuk..b gun Eric!..get outa the picture..T trst B she shouldn’t trst Monty b careful Tina..B should b her white knight&go4it tell Tina the truth, it time2get her beloved ladie..Lookin4wrd2B&T’z1st kiss..hope Alice fix the mess she made..that gurl a trip THNK u4writing..Love how u capture the essence of the L-wrd gurlz..GRT chap as alwys!! positively realistic..Post soon
I’m loving it. It’s so nicely written i can just see them sitting and her behaviout to Eric, i believe he tried it with her and turned him down badly. Post soon, alsways nice to read your story in the morning before work
this is great! i look forward to your posts everyday. hope you can post soon!
I am loving this story. It is so cute reading how Tina is wanting to know everything about Bette. Bette is being too nice by not telling Tina what happened with Eric. Eric is just a jerk and needs an adjustment with his behaviour and quick.
Sooo great this story….
Tina’s a smart girl. I’m glad she snuck a listen. Not only is she cautious of Eric…now she is suspicious. It will never work. So what’s the history between Bette and Eric?