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More Than a Feeling
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"Fu–"
"The flowers were really nice, thanks Eric." Tina said as she reentered the room.
"Fu—or just a minute." Eric said quickly, trying to save himself.
"What?" Tina said, looking from Bette to Eric and back again.
"Oh, I was just telling Bette that I was staying for just a minute." Eric plastered on his best smile. "I wanted to ask if you wanted to go out again tomorrow night."
Biting her lip, Tina thought about it. "Um…I don’t know. I have a paper to write so…"
"How about tomorrow afternoon then?"
Bette had to lock her jaw shut to keep herself from screaming, "Don’t do it Tina!"
"Let me think about it Romeo." Tina said. "I’ll call you later, okay?"
"That’s fine." Eric mumbled, a little disappointed. He opened the door, kissing Tina on the cheek before turning to leave. "Bye."
"Bye." Tina said, before closing the door. She pulled her hair back behind her ear, exhaling loudly as she took her seat on the couch once more.
"Are you…going to go out with him again?" Bette made an effort to say, trying her best not to gag, or scream or do both.
Tina shrugged. "I don’t know. He seems nice enough, but it’s not really there. But it might be too soon to tell."
"What do you mean?"
"Well, last night, when he dropped me off, we kissed." Tina started and Bette had to force her face to remain neutral. "But I didn’t feel anything. That spark wasn’t there. He’s a good kisser, don’t get me wrong, but…I dunno. It just didn’t click. Maybe it’s too soon to tell though."
"Maybe." Bette managed to say, though on the inside she wanted to scream, "Forget him then! You don’t need him!"
"I guess I can give him lunch."
And nothing else! If I know Monty, which I’m sure I do, he’ll want something more. "You can." And Bette couldn’t help herself when she added, "Just be careful."
"You can." And Bette couldn’t help herself when she added, "Just be careful."
"I will be." Tina said, nodding. "Oh, by the way, why do you call him Monty?"
"Huh?"
"You called Eric, ‘Monty.’ Why?"
"Because it pisses him off." Bette chuckled.
"I take it you two don’t get along?"
Bette let out a long sigh. "It’s a long story, one that I will happily share with you later. But right now, you still like him, so I don’t want to ruin it for you." Figuring she better change the subject quickly, Bette grabbed the remote. "I’m sure there’s something on TV we can watch."
"Allright." Tina said, confused. Well, whatever it was, it wasn’t good. It’s amazing the things you can hear when you’re just a ROOM away. Bette calling Romeo a man-whore I get, but him calling her an ice bitch? Something must’ve happened. I won’t push it though. She’ll tell me when she feels like it.
But why do I so desperately want to know everything about her? Tina thought to herself as she watched Bette flip through the channels once more.
Tina thought to herself as she watched Bette flip through the channels once more.
To Be Continued
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Great Chapter, What’s up between Bette and Monty? Post Soon
lol yeah, why does Tina desperately wants to know everything about Bette huh? hmm oh well i don’t knowww, maybe because this is another B&T beginning lol
Eric such an ass and glad Tina trust Bette and not going out with Monty. Oh Tina want to know everything about Bette, this gonna be good, and what’s happen between Bette and Monty. OK post soon please, thanks!
exactly was lamentamini said…eric tried bette n she dissed him!! so sad monty so sad!
Ice bitch huh. I bet asshole Eric tried to score with Bette and she shot him down. Maybe while Bette is flipping through the channels a movie wit a couple of hot women will be on and Bette can gauge Tina’s reaction. ;)
Holy hell I needed this chapter to pull me out of the trenches from Sunday’s episode. Why am I even watching when I can just live happily in Fan Fiction Denialville? Manda, your story is excellent and again, I thank you for writing it at a time when it’s situation critical. As for Bette, woman up and go get your girl. Parting is such sweet sorrow, Monty! PLEASE post soon if life allows Manda.
My friend introduced me to this story of yours.. It’s great!!! I just totally love the way you are writing B&T.. and Alice she is a riot! hahaha.. I really hope everything is going to be aright with Dana. Can’t wait to see B&T’s first kiss *wink*.. hahaha.. Great work! Next Chapter Please :)
This was great, and your dialogue is very good!! Thanks!
Wow, Tina is very trusting… Hope it doesn’t get her in trouble… Thanks for writing it!
i can answer this for you, tina: because you like her more than a friend….love this chapter, at least tina isn’t mad at bette…i’m glad tina heard it all…and his nickname reminds me of full monty LOL
Love it. Please post soon
very good chapter, i am glad Tina wasn`t mad with Bette, she trust her. i hope she won`t go out wiht Monty! keep posting you are doing great! thanks for happy times for B&T
haha Eric lft disapointed that makes me happie :) hmm..so Bette&Monty have a past hay..that bloke BAD newz..he can shag&bag ne babe y mst he have his peker set on Tina..no sprks..he aint wrth it..T knew of his rep b4Bette even called Romeo a man-whore..I jus no get this..yuk..b gun Eric!..get outa the picture..T trst B she shouldn’t trst Monty b careful Tina..B should b her white knight&go4it tell Tina the truth, it time2get her beloved ladie..Lookin4wrd2B&T’z1st kiss..hope Alice fix the mess she made..that gurl a trip THNK u4writing..Love how u capture the essence of the L-wrd gurlz..GRT chap as alwys!! positively realistic..Post soon
I’m loving it. It’s so nicely written i can just see them sitting and her behaviout to Eric, i believe he tried it with her and turned him down badly. Post soon, alsways nice to read your story in the morning before work
this is great! i look forward to your posts everyday. hope you can post soon!
I am loving this story. It is so cute reading how Tina is wanting to know everything about Bette. Bette is being too nice by not telling Tina what happened with Eric. Eric is just a jerk and needs an adjustment with his behaviour and quick.
Sooo great this story….
Tina’s a smart girl. I’m glad she snuck a listen. Not only is she cautious of Eric…now she is suspicious. It will never work. So what’s the history between Bette and Eric?