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More Than a Feeling
Tina obliged, removing her leg and sitting up straighter. The girl sat. "Thanks."
"No problem." Tina answered before returning her attentions to her walkman.
A few minutes later, Tina caught the girl glancing her way every few seconds, looking as if she wanted to say something but was too nervous to. Tina sighed. Might as well start off the year with some good karma. She pulled the headphone out of her right ear. "You a freshman?"
The girl nodded.
"I thought so. I’m Tina." Tina turned and extended her hand.
The girl stared at it tentatively before taking it. "Jenny."
"Nice to meet you Jenny. If you need help finding your way or anything, you can try to find me and I’ll help you out."
"Thanks, I might take you up on that offer." Jenny smiled shyly, playing with the bottom of her shirt.
The bus pulled to a screeching halt, signaling that its destination had been reached. Immediately, students crammed into the small isle between the seats and began filing out. Jenny and Tina were among the last to leave, stepping off the bus into the harsh sunlight.
"Well, Jenny, on behalf of the student body of Corona Bay High School, welcome. Good luck." She muttered.
Tina stared at the brick red four story building that she had been attending for three years now. Corona Bay High School, one of two public high schools in the Corona Bay area. The green campus was already filled and buzzing with students. To her right, girls squealed with delight as they met their friends, jumping up and down as they embraced.
Over to her left, a group of guys were throwing a football around. By the trees further up the campus, a circle of rockers/stoners were unsuccessfully trying to keep a hacky-sack in the air. Students ran, skated, biked, and roller-bladed around her. Different types of music, blaring from boom boxes and car stereos mixed in the air, creating a sense of total chaos. Ah, high school…hell on Earth.
Gripping tightly on to her notebook, the only school supply she had, besides a pen jammed in the spine, Tina began the long arduous journey to the front entrance, praying that nothing/nobody would hit her.
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(71 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I love it, it’s great. Keep going, I can’t wait for an update!!!
yeah i’m liking it, i think you should continue. It’s alot better then what i could do
i loved it post soon
Great start, keep it going. Thanks for the post.
I Love it, Keep it comming.
i love all new B&T beginnings…keep going
Thanks, my day is just starting…and you already made it. Looking forward to the next chapter soon.
Manda, I don’t think that I can adequately express my gratitude for this TiBette beginning. This is sooooooooo welcome. I personally feel like Ilene has raked me over the coals and then tarred and feathered me with S3. Please post often so that I may escape the torture. I’ll be less dramatic in my comments on the next chapter.
all the Bette and Tina happy times are wonderful you should continue writting this story. congrats
I was jonesing for another B&T beginning and here it was. This is great – please post again soon!
two words.. please continue
Great! Oh! Please, continue, continue, continue! I love B&T. I just cannot get enough of new beginnings.
More please!
Might I say I’m “captured”, I love the title and the story. Bette and Tina will always rock and I look happily forward to your next post :-)
GREAT START…JUST Hope u continue and don’t abandon the story in the middle, like some of the other stories.
I’m really excited to see how this turns out. Looking at high school through Tina’s eyes cracked me up, especially the view from outside the building. It reminded me of the beginning scenes of “Mr. Holland’s Opus” in 1994 just before he was told he’d be cut loose from his job. This Bette seems so innocent and this Tina seems so “whatever.” Please post again soon!
This is good and like it. Please post soon, thanks!
I like this, just keep it going please thanks
love it! please post soon
waitin for the next chapter!
I liked your previous story and I love Bette and Tina beginnings and reminds and now since watching South of Nowhere can really get in the mindset of high school. pls post soon!
Hello there, this is a pretty good an well written story ou have going on here. Really hope you do continue to write it. With no futher ado, let me tell you : You Rock!, and bye.
i like plz continue
What do i think? i think its a master piece! hell ive been wishing for a good teenage bette and tina beginning for a while now, and i would just like to thank you on fufulling my wish. its an awesome start to an awesome story, you have to continue or i will die of antisipation! anyway looking forward to the next post *fingers crossed* and till then ta ta!
LOVED IT! I like the way you narrative the story, the comparison of Bette and Tina. Please continue
I always love B&T beginnings and especially when they are very well written like this one….please continue – great start :o))