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More Than a Feeling
Bette shrugged. "I have no idea." Then, as they hit a red light, Bette turned to Alice with a devilish smile on her face. "But I do know…" She trailed off as she hit a button. "That the top comes off."
Alice gasped as the top of the car separated from the windshield and began to fold itself into the trunk. "Hey, you think I can get your father to adopt me? I’m in desperate need of a new car. My piece of crap is still in the shop."
"Alice, it’s only a ‘piece of crap’ because you wrapped it around a pole last week." Bette nodded.
"That car was on its way out and we both know it." Alice argued. "I put it out of its misery."
"And upped your mother’s insurance by another thousand…again."
"Minor setback."
Bette just rolled her eyes and shook her head.
"So" Alice began, turning to Bette with a big evil grin on her face, "When do I get to take this baby for a spin?"
"Sometime between in your dreams and never in your life."
"Ouch"
Soon, they were pulling into the school parking lot. Bette put the top back on while Alice groaned.
"Oh, I am so fucking glad that we only have one more year in this hell pit."
Bette exhaled. "Yeah, one more year." And then I am out of here, away from these mindless idiots forever. Bette locked the doors and soon, she and Alice were slinking their way to the entrance.
Five feet from the car, somebody slammed hard into Bette’s shoulder, causing her to drop her books and stumble backward. "Hey, watch where you’re walking asshole." Bette said to the tall, lanky, shorthaired…girl. And the only way Bette could tell it was a girl was the soft features in her face. The culprit turned and scoffed, flipping Bette the bird before continuing on her merry way.
Bette bent down to collect her books as Alice shook her head. "Man, the freshies are getting angrier and angrier every year."
"Fucking asshole." Bette muttered, flipping one of her notebooks closed. Suddenly, someone was handing her a pen she dropped. Bette looked up. It was a girl, fair-skinned with wavy blonde hair. She had headphone wires dangling from her ear.
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(71 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I love it, it’s great. Keep going, I can’t wait for an update!!!
yeah i’m liking it, i think you should continue. It’s alot better then what i could do
i loved it post soon
Great start, keep it going. Thanks for the post.
I Love it, Keep it comming.
i love all new B&T beginnings…keep going
Thanks, my day is just starting…and you already made it. Looking forward to the next chapter soon.
Manda, I don’t think that I can adequately express my gratitude for this TiBette beginning. This is sooooooooo welcome. I personally feel like Ilene has raked me over the coals and then tarred and feathered me with S3. Please post often so that I may escape the torture. I’ll be less dramatic in my comments on the next chapter.
all the Bette and Tina happy times are wonderful you should continue writting this story. congrats
I was jonesing for another B&T beginning and here it was. This is great – please post again soon!
two words.. please continue
Great! Oh! Please, continue, continue, continue! I love B&T. I just cannot get enough of new beginnings.
More please!
Might I say I’m “captured”, I love the title and the story. Bette and Tina will always rock and I look happily forward to your next post :-)
GREAT START…JUST Hope u continue and don’t abandon the story in the middle, like some of the other stories.
I’m really excited to see how this turns out. Looking at high school through Tina’s eyes cracked me up, especially the view from outside the building. It reminded me of the beginning scenes of “Mr. Holland’s Opus” in 1994 just before he was told he’d be cut loose from his job. This Bette seems so innocent and this Tina seems so “whatever.” Please post again soon!
This is good and like it. Please post soon, thanks!
I like this, just keep it going please thanks
love it! please post soon
waitin for the next chapter!
I liked your previous story and I love Bette and Tina beginnings and reminds and now since watching South of Nowhere can really get in the mindset of high school. pls post soon!
Hello there, this is a pretty good an well written story ou have going on here. Really hope you do continue to write it. With no futher ado, let me tell you : You Rock!, and bye.
i like plz continue
What do i think? i think its a master piece! hell ive been wishing for a good teenage bette and tina beginning for a while now, and i would just like to thank you on fufulling my wish. its an awesome start to an awesome story, you have to continue or i will die of antisipation! anyway looking forward to the next post *fingers crossed* and till then ta ta!
LOVED IT! I like the way you narrative the story, the comparison of Bette and Tina. Please continue
I always love B&T beginnings and especially when they are very well written like this one….please continue – great start :o))