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More Than a Feeling
"Tina!" Someone shouted behind her and she turned.
Dana Fairbanks, Tina’s best friend since the seventh grade, came running up to her and pulled her into the tightest bear hug Tina had gotten in years. Dana was the daughter of one of the richer couples in Corona Bay, and a tennis star in the making. "Hey Dane!" Tina said, hugging her friend back.
"Oh my God, I missed you, how’ve you been! How’s life?"
"Dana, you saw me last night."
"I know, I just saw all these girls jumping up and down, seeing their friends for the first time all summer and I felt left out."
"Weirdo."
"Spaz."
"Whatever." Tina chuckled, shaking her head. "So, what homeroom are you in?"
"Jenkins. You?"
"Same."
"Thank God. I hate it when I have to sit next to someone I don’t know."
"You know, we should really try to get more friends." Tina said, and then both girls looked at one another and shook their heads.
"Nah."
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Bette pulled her car to a slow crawl just behind Alice, who was walking on the sidewalk. Grinning, she honked, and laughed when Alice barely acknowledged her. Bette honked again, eliciting a slight turn in her direction, but not enough for Alice to recognize her. She decided to see how far she could take it. Deepening her voice, she shouted. "Hey, sexy!"
She could see Alice shiver in disgust. "Hey baby! Wanna go for a ride?" Bette barely got out before having to stifle her laughs with one of her hands. Alice began to speed up. With tears nearly streaming down her face, Bette honked one more time, and Alice had it.
She turned sharply. "Listen asshole, it’s too freaking early in the day to–" Alice trailed off as her jaw dropped. Bette let herself laugh out loud as she honked again and came to a stop. Alice ran over, bending down and sticking her head in the window. "Porter you dick! Holy shit, where did you get this car?"
"It’s a present from my father. Get in!"
Bette didn’t have to tell Alice twice. In seconds, she was in the front seat, admiring the interior, the dashboard, the glove compartment, the radio "Well, thank you Daddy." Alice exclaimed, whistling. "How much did this set him back?"
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(71 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I love it, it’s great. Keep going, I can’t wait for an update!!!
yeah i’m liking it, i think you should continue. It’s alot better then what i could do
i loved it post soon
Great start, keep it going. Thanks for the post.
I Love it, Keep it comming.
i love all new B&T beginnings…keep going
Thanks, my day is just starting…and you already made it. Looking forward to the next chapter soon.
Manda, I don’t think that I can adequately express my gratitude for this TiBette beginning. This is sooooooooo welcome. I personally feel like Ilene has raked me over the coals and then tarred and feathered me with S3. Please post often so that I may escape the torture. I’ll be less dramatic in my comments on the next chapter.
all the Bette and Tina happy times are wonderful you should continue writting this story. congrats
I was jonesing for another B&T beginning and here it was. This is great – please post again soon!
two words.. please continue
Great! Oh! Please, continue, continue, continue! I love B&T. I just cannot get enough of new beginnings.
More please!
Might I say I’m “captured”, I love the title and the story. Bette and Tina will always rock and I look happily forward to your next post :-)
GREAT START…JUST Hope u continue and don’t abandon the story in the middle, like some of the other stories.
I’m really excited to see how this turns out. Looking at high school through Tina’s eyes cracked me up, especially the view from outside the building. It reminded me of the beginning scenes of “Mr. Holland’s Opus” in 1994 just before he was told he’d be cut loose from his job. This Bette seems so innocent and this Tina seems so “whatever.” Please post again soon!
This is good and like it. Please post soon, thanks!
I like this, just keep it going please thanks
love it! please post soon
waitin for the next chapter!
I liked your previous story and I love Bette and Tina beginnings and reminds and now since watching South of Nowhere can really get in the mindset of high school. pls post soon!
Hello there, this is a pretty good an well written story ou have going on here. Really hope you do continue to write it. With no futher ado, let me tell you : You Rock!, and bye.
i like plz continue
What do i think? i think its a master piece! hell ive been wishing for a good teenage bette and tina beginning for a while now, and i would just like to thank you on fufulling my wish. its an awesome start to an awesome story, you have to continue or i will die of antisipation! anyway looking forward to the next post *fingers crossed* and till then ta ta!
LOVED IT! I like the way you narrative the story, the comparison of Bette and Tina. Please continue
I always love B&T beginnings and especially when they are very well written like this one….please continue – great start :o))