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Moving On Chapter 32
Bette thought to herself, Who is Jack? Who is this Jack?. The only logical explanation is that Tina must be seeing someone named Jack God, Tina has gone back to dating men!!!! her heart saddened and her thoughts consumed by the totally unfounded theory.
Bette took a deep breath, breathing in the familiar scent of Tina; taking a moment to appreciate the immediate closeness to her former wife. She couldnt think about Jack right now, she told herself that it was only a theory, she would worry about that later, right now she had to be there for Tina.
Tina regained her composure just enough to ask one simple question, (hesitantly) Bette, what*sniff* Um, what year is it? deftly afraid of the answer she was about to receive.
Bette: (baffled at the question) Its 2004(concerned) are you ok Tee?.. What year do you think it is???
Tears streamed down Tinas cheeks once more as she began rambling inaudibly, adding to Bettes confusion, searching Bettes eyes with her own in a desperate plea for safety, for hope, for help, for somethingsomething that would take her away from this alternate reality that she was now seemingly faced with.
Tina: (saddened at the realization) Oh my god it was all a dreamjust a dream!! Tina sobbed and sunk, once again, into Bettes safe arms holding her as tightly as she could!! It felt so realLast night, little Jack, the whole last weekit was just a god damn dream. a ***** dream!!
Bette didnt know what Tina was rambling on about, barely able to hear her words. She just hugged Tina back as tightly as she could, trying to absorb some of her obvious paintrying to ease her immense suffering. She didnt know what Tina was talking about, but she was going to find out, when Tina was ready to tell her; and she was going to take care of Tina, even if Tina didnt want her to anymore
Bette was never going to let anything bad happen to her again! Nothing or no one was going to hurt her Tee again, herself included!! She had made that solemn promise to herself the moment she heard about the accident and she fully intended to honour that no matter what the circumstances. no matter what the costsno matter how unrealistic it sounded!!!
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(74 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
I knew it was gonna turn this way from when I read your comment about taking a different direction. Nice dream though.
MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..
….Noooooooo! lol! ugh, im lovin’ the story!
ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….
Ok, wow mates you really know how to shock! I had no idea the story was going to take on this angle, great writing as always. Post soon. k xx
Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.
We’ve missed you Mates! Glad to see you’re back with a great twist may I add! Continue soon please!
Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!
Wow, I’m so glad you’re back…. and what a way to come back!! Please post again soon? =0)
Welcome back! Talk about twists; I think you won the grand jury prize for the biggest twister on this site. Can’t wait to read more.
I love a good story…no surprise I love what you are doing here. Take a bow, that was brilliantly crafted.
Wow, what a turn around. You have opened up a world of possibilities. Great story, Mates.
What a twist! can’t wait to see next.
OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.
mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!
What is it with all these bloody cliff hangers?!? these aren’t good for my heart!!
Update soon please!!!
omg whats going on??? is she just just dreaming this or is this her reality?
Good god, Mates! You really surprised the heck out of me! Nice twist! Now I’m dying to know what happens next.
Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!
Wow nice Mate. I love the twist sort of Dallas like but love it. I’m glad you’re back you always capture me with your writing Thanks
CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???
this is most definantly the greatest twist on this site.wb and great job
Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
again, how could you do this to us? I love it!
I think the doctor is Kristy! Why else would Tina pass out?
Poor little Jack, we hardly knew ye!
Great twist–I have no idea where this is going but it’s great please continue
Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!
Boy you got me. what a twist. Fabulous. 5 stars – of course.
now this is one hell of a story. I didn’t even see that coming.
Must update soon!
oooo… dr. krissy?
love the new twist!! keep it up and post soon!!
WELL DONE BABE THIS WAS FANTASTIC I LOVED THE WAY YOU WENT AND YOU HAVE THAT HOT DR STEPH BACK IN IT NICE PLEASE POST A.S.A.P
DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back
oh my god this is so not what I expected but its great post soon please
wow mates… left me speechless, great chapter, now i hope she can hear things out and get things sorted out the right way :)
oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!
Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx
I’m back and i loveeee this chapter…. Brilliantly planned out :P
on to the next…