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Moving On Chapter 32
The nurse completed her examination of Tina and was happy with the initial results, Alright, Tinayour doctor is on her way, and she should be here shortly dear ok. I will tell the rest of your visitors you are awake, shall I?they are all dying to see you (slightly chuckling at the memory of Alice hassling her every five minutes for a Tina update since the moment she started her shift, every single day) Please dont over do it though!
Tina looked at Bette teary eyed, questionably.
Bette: (compassionately) Kit, Alice, Shane and Dana are here babUm, Tee, we were all incredibly worried about you!. oh, and your mum will be in soon, she was here all night!
They both looked briefly at the nurse, answering simply, in unison, Yes, Thank you! before she walked out the room to advise the girls.
Bette and Tina just smiled into each others eyes, a smile full of hope and of love!! Bette felt like her heart was going to explode with joy. That was the first sign of hope, that all was not lost in their relationship, that she had been given; but Tina was in a vulnerable state and Bette didnt want to read too much into it. she couldnt handle it if it that was all it turned out to be!
Tina looked into Bettes eyes again, pleading for more answers, (desperately) How long have I been in here Bette? craving contact with Bette, needing to feel safe and secure, taking her hand in her own.
Bette was pleasantly shocked at the reaction Tina had had to her so far she didnt understand it, but wasnt going to push
Bette: (sympathetic but torn over what to tell Tina) Tee can you just wait for the doctorI dont want to tell you anything Im not supposed too. You were unconscious and hurt really bad stopping, realizing what she was about to divulge. Caressing Tinas smooth gentle fingers, revelling in the permission she had been given; to be able to simply touch her estranged lover; Bette looked intensely into Tinas eyes, seeing the inner turmoil, sharing a moment of understanding and connection with her.
Just as they were becoming lost in each others eyes, the girls entered the room somewhat loudly and cheerily, overjoyed in response to the good news that Tina was awake, interrupting the conversation and the tender moment between Bette and Tina.
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(74 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
I knew it was gonna turn this way from when I read your comment about taking a different direction. Nice dream though.
MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..
….Noooooooo! lol! ugh, im lovin’ the story!
ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….
Ok, wow mates you really know how to shock! I had no idea the story was going to take on this angle, great writing as always. Post soon. k xx
Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.
We’ve missed you Mates! Glad to see you’re back with a great twist may I add! Continue soon please!
Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!
Wow, I’m so glad you’re back…. and what a way to come back!! Please post again soon? =0)
Welcome back! Talk about twists; I think you won the grand jury prize for the biggest twister on this site. Can’t wait to read more.
I love a good story…no surprise I love what you are doing here. Take a bow, that was brilliantly crafted.
Wow, what a turn around. You have opened up a world of possibilities. Great story, Mates.
What a twist! can’t wait to see next.
OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.
mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!
What is it with all these bloody cliff hangers?!? these aren’t good for my heart!!
Update soon please!!!
omg whats going on??? is she just just dreaming this or is this her reality?
Good god, Mates! You really surprised the heck out of me! Nice twist! Now I’m dying to know what happens next.
Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!
Wow nice Mate. I love the twist sort of Dallas like but love it. I’m glad you’re back you always capture me with your writing Thanks
CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???
this is most definantly the greatest twist on this site.wb and great job
Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
again, how could you do this to us? I love it!
I think the doctor is Kristy! Why else would Tina pass out?
Poor little Jack, we hardly knew ye!
Great twist–I have no idea where this is going but it’s great please continue
Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!
Boy you got me. what a twist. Fabulous. 5 stars – of course.
now this is one hell of a story. I didn’t even see that coming.
Must update soon!
oooo… dr. krissy?
love the new twist!! keep it up and post soon!!
WELL DONE BABE THIS WAS FANTASTIC I LOVED THE WAY YOU WENT AND YOU HAVE THAT HOT DR STEPH BACK IN IT NICE PLEASE POST A.S.A.P
DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back
oh my god this is so not what I expected but its great post soon please
wow mates… left me speechless, great chapter, now i hope she can hear things out and get things sorted out the right way :)
oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!
Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx
I’m back and i loveeee this chapter…. Brilliantly planned out :P
on to the next…