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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 7– BEHIND THE MIRROR – THE SECOND WAVE
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Alice lands her lips on Dana’s and starts kissing first softly, Dana closes her eyes corresponding and moves her hands to Alice caressing her cheeks, Alice straddles her arms around Dana’s body, the kiss gets deeper; after a while, they pull away.
Dana: (smiling) “wow…, that was… something…”
Alice: (grinning) “yes…, it really was…”
Suddenly Alice changes her face.
Alice: “did you hear that?”
Dana didn’t hear anything, but she sees something up.
Dana: “Something is coming Alice we should go… now”
Dana stands up and taking Alice hand pulls her and starts running, the blonde doesn’t complain, she has heard a faraway noise and she instinctively knows that it is very bad, both girls run, they are far from their buildings.
Alice: “we may go to the aquarium”
Dana looks toward the aquarium and then to the opposite direction.
Dana: “no, the aquarium’s doors are closed”
Alice: “come on Dana, you can’t see the doors from here”
Dana: “yes…, I could see them…, I don’t know how, but I see them and they are closed, we must go to the gym”
Alice: “are the doors of the gym open?”
Dana: “no, they are closed too, but I have the keys”
Alice: “hurry up I hear that noise again”
The two girls run to the gym and Dana opens her h-cube to use her program ‘keys’ to open the door and both girls get shelter inside.
New Pasadena, 11:20 a.m. same day –Arroyo Park Cyber observatory border with Old Los Angeles ruins
Professors in charge at this time are Vince Korsak, Danica Palmer, Franklin Phillips, Kathryn Janeway, Angus Partridge additionally are also there Sharon Fairbanks, Phyllis Kroll and Leonor Pieszecki
Sharon has tracked the ghost communication from campus to Louise and found that it came from the building H-027, which means that Bette and Tina are involved in the audacity; she feels happy that the girls talked to Louise, a remarkable achievement that has surpassed the attempts of the skilled and experimented professors of control room; but now her dilemma is to tell the others or hide the information, so she decided for the last one as she hides information to slow down the search of the ghost signal until talk to the girls first.
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Phew, happy that Tina is alright!
Sciencefiction is not something that interest me, but your story is a exception.
The “changed” girls found each other, and i am looking forward to see how they are gonna rescue Louise.
Thanks for the update!
Hi Bibi:
You can believe it or not but I was also worry about Tina, she could decide to go to her mother that she saw through a window in the wormhole, but she came back to Bette, it was a hard decision.
Now the question is why they were attacked, lightning hitting exclusively building H-027, what do you think about that?
As far as we go, there are 12 ‘changed’ girls even though they may not be the only ones with potential abilities, however they were the ones that changed because a strong emotion, love, and their change was triggered by feeling their lovers or friends in distress or danger.
That is not usual in real live sometimes love makes us move heaven and earth even using hidden abilities, of course no like the ones in this story.
I’m very glad that you like my story and each time you guys make a comment it helps me to re-write my ideas and continue this story.
Thank so much for reading, and again, sorry for my English.
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Enjoyed it, thanks.
thanks for reading
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Let me see if intender correct me if I’m talking nonsense.
This means that we have a meta-human group, and Bette and Tina are
with more powers than the others … this group are humans who possuíem “biological variation” in their METAGENE. And that this gene remained dormant until activated with this extreme storm or feeling, which is Love. And this METAGENE uses the source of this action as a catalyst for such “genetic change” resulting in meta-human abilities? !! … our mother !! … It’s getting very interesting this story.
The entire universe.
Note: I’m aware that this is a Sci-Fi.
My friend, you are extremely close:
Mutations are changes in the DNA sequence that regularly is present in certain population and it happens in single individual or group of individuals.
Evolution requires mutations that could be transferred to offspring
For mutations to be transferred to offspring they have to be in germ line cells (sex cells)
The mutations could take place in the following ways:
-By duplication of genes, where some of them remain originals (dominant and recessive genes)
-By activation of some genes, through environmental factors (including age)
-By mutations that take place in noncoding sequence (fragments) of DNA. DNA have sequences of units that coding traits (functions), these sequence are genes, however there are sequences of DNA that do not coding any trait (or not known genes)
Now, it is known that using biomolecular engineering or genetic engineering, the last type of mutations could be performed by “someone”
Thank you so much for this reflection that is helping me with the story
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I am very happy to contribute to its history.
And you’re leading me back to read biology books.
Bear hug.
I hope I’m not boring you with these technicalities. This is what Louise is questioning herself after her third dream (former chapter); did “someone” play God altering the genetic material of the cryobanks? or was there a genetic mix of DNA from humans and other species, and now is about to be expressed? That could give some explanation or have relationship to what is called a METAGENE and METAHUMANS (in some sci-fi stories and comics, which by the way I love). But here this is not going to happen to a privileged group, but to the whole human race and in different levels and you will read what it will entail
Bear hug
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