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    My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 7– BEHIND THE MIRROR – THE SECOND WAVE

    After ten minutes, there is a disturbance in the satellite system, apparently two different magnetic pulses are interfering one to the other and a third pulse is creating an especial vortex, the main satellite is sending a message that comes to earth incomplete.

    Vince: “there is a message coming from the satellite but it has been partially blocked…, let’s see, the second satellite is mirroring the message…”

    A new message appears in another visor

    ‘EMERGENCY, UNKNOWN MAGNETIC VORTEX FORMING INSIDE TOWN COORDINATES 34.1371° N, 118.1250° W, CIVILIANS UNDER ATTACK LIGHTNING STRIKES , EMERGENCY’

    In those days a way to account for human beings was using ultramicroscopic chips that were introduced under the skin of each person, when they were born. Those devices allow tracing, following and assisting humans in distress, danger or even if they were transgressing

    Angus: “those coordinates correspond to pre-undergraduate students”

    Phyllis: “which building?”

    Angus: “H-027”

    Sharon: “oh my God… this is Bette and Tina’s building”

    ‘EMERGENCY, UNKNOWN MAGNETIC VORTEX FORMING INSIDE TOWN COORDINATES 34.1371° N, 118.1250° W, CIVILIANS UNDER ATTACK SECOND LIGHTNING STRIKES, POSSIBLE CASUALTIES, EMERGENCY’

    Franklin: “computer submit damage assessment”

    “one young civilian hurt and one vanished”

    Danica: “names, give us names”

    “civilian hurt name Dylan Moreland, civilian vanished Christina Kennard”

    Sharon: (crying) “oh no…, no…, it can’t be, no Tina, we have to go and look for her”

    Kathryn: (sad) “calm down Sharon, we have to wait now, but we will go there as soon as possible”

     

    New Pasadena, 11:35 a.m. same day. New CalTech -building H-027- Bette Porter’s quarters

     

    After the communication finishes, Bette tell the girls to not speak to anybody about the hphone’s call, because some of the eldest couldn’t understand why they have violated many universities and state security rules and the four of them could be punished for surpassing the satellites instance, hack an hphone and intrude in military and security business; the other three have the same insight on their deeds and agree with that.

    Bo and Lauren left, and the other girls started working on the security codes to retrieve Maxine file. Suddenly the darkish sky was illuminated and simultaneously a strong rumble shook the building fortunately the lightning rod absorbed most of the energy, but many objects were smashed, especially the glass-made ones, there are loud noises and shouts among the students and someone came telling that a girl has been injured, both girls wanted to go help the others, but Bette in protective mode spoke.

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    1. Phew, happy that Tina is alright!

      Sciencefiction is not something that interest me, but your story is a exception.

      The “changed” girls found each other, and i am looking forward to see how they are gonna rescue Louise.

      Thanks for the update!

      • Hi Bibi:
        You can believe it or not but I was also worry about Tina, she could decide to go to her mother that she saw through a window in the wormhole, but she came back to Bette, it was a hard decision.
        Now the question is why they were attacked, lightning hitting exclusively building H-027, what do you think about that?
        As far as we go, there are 12 ‘changed’ girls even though they may not be the only ones with potential abilities, however they were the ones that changed because a strong emotion, love, and their change was triggered by feeling their lovers or friends in distress or danger.
        That is not usual in real live sometimes love makes us move heaven and earth even using hidden abilities, of course no like the ones in this story.
        I’m very glad that you like my story and each time you guys make a comment it helps me to re-write my ideas and continue this story.
        Thank so much for reading, and again, sorry for my English.

        P

    2. Let me see if intender correct me if I’m talking nonsense.
      This means that we have a meta-human group, and Bette and Tina are
      with more powers than the others … this group are humans who possuíem “biological variation” in their METAGENE. And that this gene remained dormant until activated with this extreme storm or feeling, which is Love. And this METAGENE uses the source of this action as a catalyst for such “genetic change” resulting in meta-human abilities? !! … our mother !! … It’s getting very interesting this story.
      The entire universe.

      Note: I’m aware that this is a Sci-Fi.

    3. My friend, you are extremely close:

      Mutations are changes in the DNA sequence that regularly is present in certain population and it happens in single individual or group of individuals.
      Evolution requires mutations that could be transferred to offspring
      For mutations to be transferred to offspring they have to be in germ line cells (sex cells)
      The mutations could take place in the following ways:
      -By duplication of genes, where some of them remain originals (dominant and recessive genes)
      -By activation of some genes, through environmental factors (including age)
      -By mutations that take place in noncoding sequence (fragments) of DNA. DNA have sequences of units that coding traits (functions), these sequence are genes, however there are sequences of DNA that do not coding any trait (or not known genes)
      Now, it is known that using biomolecular engineering or genetic engineering, the last type of mutations could be performed by “someone”
      Thank you so much for this reflection that is helping me with the story

      P

        • I hope I’m not boring you with these technicalities. This is what Louise is questioning herself after her third dream (former chapter); did “someone” play God altering the genetic material of the cryobanks? or was there a genetic mix of DNA from humans and other species, and now is about to be expressed? That could give some explanation or have relationship to what is called a METAGENE and METAHUMANS (in some sci-fi stories and comics, which by the way I love). But here this is not going to happen to a privileged group, but to the whole human race and in different levels and you will read what it will entail

          Bear hug

          P

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