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    No Room at the Inn

    Bette ran her hand through her thick curls and rested her forehead in the palm of her hand.

    “And in a couple of days, I will be there too. Ugh. There you go talking to yourself again. I’m obviously going in sane.”

    Bette exhaled loudly and wondered if she should tell Tina she was coming to Vancouver. She wasn’t sure if she was ready to see the blonde again. She wasn’t so sure if she’d ever really be ready to see Tina any time soon. She certainly wasn’t pleased by the way she left things. The way she walked out of the courtyard leaving Tina alone in tears, hearing her scream fuck as the door closed.

    Bette wanted to run back and gather her into her arms and hug her and inhale her like she’d planned when she ran downstairs to find Tina in the first place. But seeing her standing so closely to Sam and laughing ignited something deep inside of her. Bette was jealous and her pride wouldn’t allow her to let it go. She needed to know whom the woman was who was making Tina laugh in her absence. Bette saw the panic in Tina’s eyes but she didn’t care. She had to see if Tina would tell her the truth. And even after Tina told her the truth, Bette wanted her to feel what it felt like to be walked out on. It was not one of her finer moments.

    And with that awareness, Bette threw the phone on the bed and changed into her swimsuit…a coral green bikini with slits on the sides this time. Tina loved the way the color popped on Bette’s mocha skin. When Bette entered the patio, Shane was waiting for her on one of the loungers.

    “I thought you’d make your way out here eventually,” Shane said.

    “I thought you went home.”

    “Short walk,” Shane laughed.

    Bette chuckled and sat on the lounger across from her.

    “You okay?”

    “Why does everyone keep asking me that?”

    “Probably because we know you’re not okay and we want you to open up because you have a tendency to hold your feelings in and then explode. And nobody wants to see that,” Shane smiled.

    Bette looked at Shane. Shane nodded and raised her right eyebrow never breaking eye contact. Bette conceded with a nod.

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    1. I doubt there is any fan of the show anywhere who has not fantasized about what happened after Bette took off her robe and entered the shower with a sweaty stinky Tina. This is awfully good wish fulfillment. Now I will see that scene this way. I’m not sure anyone else has ever completed this scene. Very well done and thank you.

      You do write a very good conflicted Bette and Tina. I particularly like this: “Bette decided neither the hurt nor the love was bigger. They were equal.” So very true I think. Despite the best of intentions, I still do not agree with Alice and Kiki tricking Bette. The ruse of the Ballon Festival while quite humorous and clever only added to Bette’s anxiety. This is far too serious for anyone to be playing games. Very good visuals by the way. I can really picture a frustrated and nervous Bette trying to find a room. This is true with the scene at Tina’s door as well. It helps in a way that Tina has been kept in the dark as well. So both are being equally tricked. Don’t blow it, Tina. Bette didn’t have many options and….: “Bette made a decision. She guessed she was about to figure out which was bigger.” So which is going to win out: the hurt or the love? I think we all know. But Kiki and Alice are going to get an earful for sure. Poor James is most likely in the clear. Deep breaths Tina. Here’s your chance. Take it slow and stay out of your own way. Check those hormones honey. Very good chapter. Really like this story a lot and your writing style as well.

      • You are correct, I often wondered what happened after Bette took off her robe and entered the shower. It was so much fun writing that scene. I liked the repetition. I feel like it gave the scene movement as if we were watching it play out.

        The trickery will be addressed in an explosive way. LOL But it had to happen in order to get Bette back to Vancouver. I couldn’t see them not seeing each other until after the movie wrapped. They have so much more to go through before KiKi’s opening. And we don’t know if Tina will make it back in time for it yet.

        I really hope the love is bigger. Fingers crossed.

        Thank you so much for your feedback and insight. It really helps me as I develop the rest of the story. Stay tuned…

      • Billy!
        I kid U not, your 1st para is exactly what I thought!! I remem being put out w/the editors foe NOT showing us this shower scene.

        What’s more, agree that the lil “matchmaker” scheme has me nervous, but Tibette4EvEv did a fab job of pulling it off. That is, as long as our love birds stay in the now and keep responding ignoring the rush of DOUBT-FILLED insecurities.

        Looking 4ward to the next chpter!!!

    2. What a fantastic story this is, I really enjoy it!!!!

      I totally agree with Billy’s comments but would like to add that I also enjoy the bond between Bette & Shane. Shane is very wise and knows how to make Bette think.

      Bette has built her walls high and it’s up to her to let Tina back in. And Tina must try to be patient and give Bette the space and time she has asked for.

      What outweighs Bette, the pain or the love? Her emotions are still going in all directions, but eventually she knows the answer.

      Tricky what everyone does but who knows, this may be what Bette and Tina need to get closer to each other.

      Finally, I think it’s so funny how Bette talks to herself and scolds herself for doing it!

      • Thank you so much. Yoda Shane is my favorite. I love how she knows exactly what to say and exactly when to show up. She is like Bette’s therapist, holding a mirror up to Bette, letting Bette know that although Tina hurt her, she also hurt Tina which needs to be explored as well.

        They are both in so much pain and the only way the pain will be resolved is if they talk through it. Really talk.

    3. Sorry… I am a little late with this comment. The trick to get Bette and Tina is rather cleaver. Sometimes circumstances just work out nicely that Bette has no choice but to ask Tina for a place to stay for her visit to Vancouver. Maybe they can put a bit of their emotions aside and talk. Really talk about their relationship and what it means to them. Tina needs to be a bit more thoughtful and deliberative in her decision making. She obviously needs to have more evidence of harm before she litterally packs her bags and bolts for the door. And as Bette is so keenly aware, past behavior can be repeated in the future. Tina needs to learn to listen and allow Bette to speak and evaluate what she says based on her behavior. Bette is at some point going to have to accept the risk that Tina very well could bolt for the door without reason again. Acceptance of responsibility for their own behavior and their own responses are key. But they also need to accept that has impact on the ones they love. There will be future problems if these two should get back together…. but these problems can be overcome and repaired with the right amount of work, communication and forgiveness and hopefully to put processes in to prevent repeats. It is going to be interesting to see just how these two resolve their issues….

      Thanks for the chapter.

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