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    No Turning Back ~chapter 14~

    Ouch.. Im sorry. Carmen said, with a sympathizing frown.

    Ive been in those situations before.. he shrugged, Girls always seem to fall for the assholes, dont they?

    I dont know, Carmen said.

    You dont know? I mean what do you prefer, the tough, muscled guy or the sweet, nerdy guy whos gonna read you poems and stuff.

    Carmen chuckled but her smile soon faded because she really didnt have an answer to his question.

    Hm? Tobey said, when he still hadnt got an answer after awhile.

    Fuck man, I really dont know, Carmen said helplessly, getting enough already of acting straight.

    I think you would go for the good-looking asshole, Tobey said pensively.

    Carmen cocked her brow. Tobey threw his hands up in defeat. No offence or something, but you just seem like that type of girl.

    That type of girl? Carmen repeated and she couldnt help but laugh.

    Yeah, I mean, youre just too hot not to be one of those, Tobey explained.

    I think you just havent met the right girl yet, Carmen said, taking a long drag of her cigarette.

    I know, its just.. its always so fucking hard isnt it? To find the right person?

    I guess you could say that yeah.. But one day, it just happens.

    How do you know that, have you met the right guy yet? Tobey asked, turning his body so he was facing Carmen now. Carmen shrugged and took another drag. I.. Ive met the right person yeah.

    Okay, so I guess this date is officially over, Tobey said laughing. Carmen chuckled along slightly.

    Hmm.. its kinda weird though, how come Laura didnt mention him to Diego? Tobey asked pensively. Carmen kept quiet.

    Or am I asking too many questions? Im sorry Ill just shut up, I..

    No! I mean yeah.. youre asking a lot of questions but I dont mind its just that.. Carmen interrupted. Just.. you cant tell me the answers? Tobey asked. Carmen looked up at his face. His eyes were kind and polite, and she knew he wouldnt judge her. He was a nice guy.

    I guess yeah.. I mean, if I were to tell you this youve got to promise to keep it to yourself.

    Tobey nodded understanding. Really, you can tell me anything, secrets are save with me. My older brother once broke my mothers favorite vase and I ended up getting punished for it, but I never told her he was the one who broke it.

    Comments

    1. yey for really long updates like this one. haha it was a great chapter. I really liked it and I am glad to hear that Carmen is going home early to see Shane. I wonder how much drama is going to come into play if any soon. either way i love the story and cant wait for the next update.

    2. I really love this story it always makes my day when theres a update and it helps me not to think about how bad the show end this season so thank you and update soon plz *love sharmen 4 ever*

    3. I don’t know if I’ve left fedback for this fic before, but great fic! :D I’ve reading it since you started posting it. And you finally updated, coolness! :D It’s especially nice after TLW season finale. Onto the feedback: I’m curious about how Julian found out about Carmen and Lucia. o.0 Hmmm.I hope Carmen doesn’t get in trouble with Shane if Shane finds out about Carmen’s little date, or if Shane were to see the picture… And yay! Soon Carmen will be back with Shane! WOOT! Hope you update again soon. :)

    4. Love your story. Julian wanting to leave early to play his X-box, too funny. My breath stopped when Shane said she was kissing some girl, glad she was kidding. Carmen should never have taken thase pictures w/ that guy, trouble ahead. Post soon.

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