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No Turning Back ~chapter 14~
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Julian stretched his body as he was slowly waken up by his sisters lowered voices. He yawned and raked a hand through his messy hair, listening carefully to their conversation. Diego is hot, dont you think? And really polite too.. Laura whispered dreamily. Julian shook his head and waited for Carmens response, but she didnt answer Laura. Are you okay? he heard Laura ask. Silence. Huh? Oh yeah.. sorry, Im just tired, Im going to bed, Carmen said, and he could hear her footsteps, probably towards Laura to give her a quick kiss on her cheek and then disappearing into the hallway. Laura switched on a light in the kitchen and Julian quickly pretended to be asleep again. But Lucia didnt noticed him lying on the couch and after she drank a glass of water she switched off the lights and went to bed as well.
He sat up fully and closed his eyes, when he heard muffled footsteps coming down the stairs again. It was Carmen, with her cell phone in her hand, trying to call someone. The other person didnt pick up and she sighed, raking a hand through her hair. Julian sat perfectly still, as he heard Carmen ticking her nails on the edge of the table. A subtle sign that she was worrying. He didnt want Carmen to see him now, it would feel to her like he was spying on her. Maybe he was though, but there was just something different about her lately. She was more distant, like she was somewhere else with her head. He didnt know what exactly she was thinking about, although he had his suspicions, but he was going to find out. Shed might confide her secrets to him. Julian? Carmen asked surprised, as she sat down next to him. Julian looked up, his eyes big as if he was suddenly waken up from a daydream. What are you still doing up?
I wasnt, I was sleeping on the couch, Julian replied, rubbing his eyes with his hands.
Whyd you do that?
Because I have to sleep in the same room with three little annoying children?!
Ow.. sorry, Carmen said quietly.
Its okay. Laura told me you complained about the fact I talk in my sleep?
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yey for really long updates like this one. haha it was a great chapter. I really liked it and I am glad to hear that Carmen is going home early to see Shane. I wonder how much drama is going to come into play if any soon. either way i love the story and cant wait for the next update.
I really love this story it always makes my day when theres a update and it helps me not to think about how bad the show end this season so thank you and update soon plz *love sharmen 4 ever*
I don’t know if I’ve left fedback for this fic before, but great fic! :D I’ve reading it since you started posting it. And you finally updated, coolness! :D It’s especially nice after TLW season finale. Onto the feedback: I’m curious about how Julian found out about Carmen and Lucia. o.0 Hmmm.I hope Carmen doesn’t get in trouble with Shane if Shane finds out about Carmen’s little date, or if Shane were to see the picture… And yay! Soon Carmen will be back with Shane! WOOT! Hope you update again soon. :)
I’m really enjoying this story…I can’t wait to see Carmen surprise Shane…Please continue with your story…Thanks!
Love your story. Julian wanting to leave early to play his X-box, too funny. My breath stopped when Shane said she was kissing some girl, glad she was kidding. Carmen should never have taken thase pictures w/ that guy, trouble ahead. Post soon.
Oh oh oh…..don´t dare you to let Shane cheat on Carmen, don´t do that please!!
Great Story…it was more than great!!! Plz update soon!! (if u ask me i can read this story all day long :))
God! I love this story, you have to update soon :D Great work!