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No Turning Back ~chapter 14~
So how are you doing Shane? Alice asked promptly, after she ordered two more beers at the bar. Shane shrugged and took a sip from her beer. Everythings cool, she said. Alice eyed her suspiciously. Missing the girlfriend? You look tired, Alice noticed. Oh.. yknow.. WAX, Shane murmured, her lips moving against the mouth of the bottle as she spoke. Alice nodded understandably but still seemed like she knew Shane was just pretending everything was alright. But she didnt have any time to worry about that because Dana came walking in and she headed for the bar. Shane waved at her and beckoned her to come join them. Hey Dane! Shane greeted Dana as she offered her a beer. Dana sat down and gratefully took the beer, she thanked Shane and then she said hi to Alice. Alice just murmured a tiny hello back and then quickly looked elsewhere. Shane made the greatest effort to hold back her laughter, the way these two were acting around each other lately, it was just like two little kids. Shane tried to keep the conversation going but Alice kept pouting and she seemed preoccupied and when Dana went to the toilets Shane was relieved she could finally ask Alice what was wrong. Wanna tell me whats going on? Shane asked. Alice shrugged one shoulder up to her ear and played with the straw in her drink. Al.. come on, Shane insisted, youre acting all weird around her. Its just that.. she never returns my fucking calls! Alice blurted out. Shane chuckled. Thats because you probably call her every other minute Al. I dont! But.. even if I did, she could just.. I dont know, she could just tell me why she hasnt returned them or.. leave me a message or..
Al, youre being ridiculous and you know it. Now follow her into the bathroom and do your thing.
I dont have no thing Shane, god, Alice sighed, shaking her head. Shane chuckled and pushed Alice in the direction of the bathroom. Your cell phones ringing, Alice mentioned as she struggled to keep seated on her barstool. What? Oh, fuck, Shane groaned, trying to get her cell out of her tight jeans. When she finally managed to do so the caller had already hung up. She checked her call display and saw it was Carmen who had tried to reach her. Who is it? Alice asked as she saw the crease forming between Shanes eyebrows. Carmen.
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yey for really long updates like this one. haha it was a great chapter. I really liked it and I am glad to hear that Carmen is going home early to see Shane. I wonder how much drama is going to come into play if any soon. either way i love the story and cant wait for the next update.
I really love this story it always makes my day when theres a update and it helps me not to think about how bad the show end this season so thank you and update soon plz *love sharmen 4 ever*
I don’t know if I’ve left fedback for this fic before, but great fic! :D I’ve reading it since you started posting it. And you finally updated, coolness! :D It’s especially nice after TLW season finale. Onto the feedback: I’m curious about how Julian found out about Carmen and Lucia. o.0 Hmmm.I hope Carmen doesn’t get in trouble with Shane if Shane finds out about Carmen’s little date, or if Shane were to see the picture… And yay! Soon Carmen will be back with Shane! WOOT! Hope you update again soon. :)
I’m really enjoying this story…I can’t wait to see Carmen surprise Shane…Please continue with your story…Thanks!
Love your story. Julian wanting to leave early to play his X-box, too funny. My breath stopped when Shane said she was kissing some girl, glad she was kidding. Carmen should never have taken thase pictures w/ that guy, trouble ahead. Post soon.
Oh oh oh…..don´t dare you to let Shane cheat on Carmen, don´t do that please!!
Great Story…it was more than great!!! Plz update soon!! (if u ask me i can read this story all day long :))
God! I love this story, you have to update soon :D Great work!