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    Numb: Chapter 1

     

    Shane and Dana exchanged muffled giggles at how serious Alice was when it came to poker.  The two women had been playing off each other all night, raising and re-raising the pot until Alice would fold.  The night was just more fun when Alice was frustrated, annoyed, and drunk.  They had only been playing for an hour and half and they had practically cleaned the perplexed blonde out.

     

    Bette and Tina had gone away for the weekend to visit Tinas family with Angelica.  After waving them off at the airport, the trio had decided to have a poker night.  It had been awhile since they had spent much time together. Alice and Dana are together, and Shane was still prowling; which didnt leave much time for each other.  It was nice to just layback and relax with family.

     

    Al, bring me another beer.  Shane yelled into the kitchen.

     

    Stepping back into the living room, Alice took her open beer and guzzled it mockingly at Shane.  Stopping to take a breath, she grinned broadly.  Last one!

     

    Shane shook her head and her mouth formed a smile.  I knew we should have stopped and got beer, before coming here.  Now how am I going to properly get trashed?  Her fingers raked through her hair and she fell to the floor with an annoyed groan.

     

    Ill go get some.  I havent had any since I have training tomorrow, so Ill be the gopher.  Dana stood raking off crumbs off of her shirt.

     

    YeahShane we have our own little gopher!  Alice did a happy dance with her beer as her two best friends looked on laughing at the way her hips thrust back and forth. 

     

    Making her way to Alice, Dana reached down and lifted the small blonde off her feet, twirling her slightly before placing her down again.  Ill be your gopher any day.  She grinned and pulled her girlfriend in for a passionate kiss.  I love you.

     

    Alice moaned against Danas neck in complete euphoria.  I love you. 

     

    Get a room Picking up a throw pillow, Shane tossed it at the two love birds while smiling broadly at how much love and adoration they held for each other. 

    Comments

    1. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    2. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    3. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    4. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    5. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    6. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    7. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    8. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    9. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    10. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    11. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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