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    Story written on July 15, 2005 by ilovekc.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55411
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    The gang faces a tragedy and must deal with pulling the pieces together.

     

    With as much strength as he could muster he pulled her face to his mouth and he began to tell her a tale.  Through his choking and his own sobbing he managed to finish before the cold hands of death took him.

     

    Pulling up and away Dana stared ahead unblinkingly.  She knew she was dead and she waited for her life to pass before her eyes, but it didnt.  The only think she saw was Alice, smiling lovingly at her.  She never felt the cold steel on her back, she just stared in to the deep brown pools of her soul mate, as the hard bullet ripped through her chest cavity and forced her to the ground her own blood pulling with his.


              

     

    Whats taking her so long?  Alice paced the floor of her apartment her nice buzz had subsided an hour earlier.  I could have walked there and back four times!

     

    Calm down Al.  Im sure shes fine.  Shane tried to sound soothingly, but her own fears had crept up on her and she was worried about her friend.

     

    A loud knock came from the front door, and Alice threw her hands up.  Im so gonna yell at her for scaring us like this!  She made her way to the door and quickly threw it open.  Dana you got some explaining  Her voice faltered as she found herself staring at two men in police uniforms. 

     

    The bigger man removed his hat and glanced at his notepad before looking up into the small blondes face.  Do you know Miss. Dana Fairbanks?

     

    Alices whole world stopped spinning and she managed to nod yes and brace herself with the door frame.

     

    May we come in?  The officer asked his eyes sad and his mouth turned down slightly in a frown.

     

    Shane was already at Alices side pulling her away from the door, her tears already falling.  Come on Al, let them in.

     

    She allowed Shane to pull her toward the well facing the door and after a moment she regained her voice.  Tell me from thereplease just tell me.  Her eyes were welling with tears and her voice came out as a sob.

     

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    2. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    8. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    14. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    15. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    16. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    17. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    22. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    25. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    26. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    29. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    35. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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