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    Numb: Chapter 1

     

    Every Thursday Shane came to the same place with a bottle of Jack.  The first couple of times it took a while for Bette and Tina to find her.  She wouldnt answer her cell and at first they thought she had ran, the burden being too much.  Eventually Bette had found her passed out at their best friends grave, and after that the older woman took it upon herself to retrieve the drunk passed out body of her friend every Thursday. 

     

    After awhile it became routine, Bette would drop off Tina and head to the graveyard.  She would sit in her car and watch Shane yell and cry to the stone, before the boyish woman would fall weeping to the ground whispering her apologies and passing out.  Then she would carry her passed out friend to her car and take her home and put her to bed.  Tina and Bette both worried about the actions Shane took, but had decided to allow her to have her one night a week.  She knew that Shane was aware of how she got home each time, but neither of the friends would speak of it.  Instead the acted as if they were all ignorant to the torn seams that held their family together.

     

    Bette turned her attention back to the whimpering figure under the tree.  She watched the dark haired young woman kick and fight against the marble.  Resisting the urge to run to her best friend and hold her she just stared numbly at the scene. 


     

     

    The brunette cooed and cradled the squirming kitten while she waited for the vet to give the gray fur ball his shots.  She smiled at the scared little girl looking up at her in fear.  Your kitten is going to be just finethe doctor is going to give him some medicine so he wont get sick. 

     

    Kadie, did you get the syringe prepared?  The tall vet swept into the room, his hands instantly grabbing the syringe off the table.  Lifting the skin of the kitten up, he quickly gave the crying feline his shot.  There you go buddyall done.  He smiled at his assistant, who nodded at the frightened girl.  Your mom says this is your first kitten.  He dropped to his knees and looked at the clear blue eyes.  You take real good care of Lucas for me, okay?  The blonde girl nodded and smiled as she reached for Lucas.

     

    Kadie released the animal to the little girl and led them back to the waiting room and the mother.  Upon returning to the exam room, she quickly cleaned it up and went looking for the doctor.  Dr. Jackson?  She walked into his office and spotted him going through some papers on his desk.  I needed the weekend offremember? 

     

    Sure Kadieits fine.  Ill see you Monday.  He smiled up at the tall brunette and waived her out the door.

     

    Kadie returned to her small efficiency apartment.  She hated Louisville especially in the winter, and it was a rather cold one.  Her body still had not adjusted to the climate changes, but her handler insisted that eventually she would get use to it and be just as happy here as she was in West Hollywood.  Dana Fairbanks.  She rolled the words off her tongue every so often; just to be sure she hadnt forgotten her true self.  Kadie Rogers.  Bitterly she spat out her new nameno not really newit had been her name for months now. 

     

    After the shooting, she had been taken in to protective custody and the witness protection program.  Initially she fought against it, but the F.BI explained to her what would happen to her friends and family, if her killer knew she had survived.  They promised that she would be able to return to her life after he was caught and she had testified, but time continued to pass and she continued to be alone.

     

    She had a meeting with her handler this weekend, a possible break in her case.  She was excited at the possibility of seeing Alice again.  Of course this wasnt the first time they thought had a break, but she couldnt help feeling overwhelmed with joy at the very idea.  She knew that even if they caught the ***** it would be months before she could return home, but than she would be one day closeras it was there was no end in sight, and the hopelessness of the situation sometimes overwhelmed her.

     

    Staring out the window at the dirty snow and passing cars, Dana mumbled to the empty room.  I love you Aliceand Im coming homeI promise.

    Comments

    1. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    2. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    3. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    4. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    5. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    6. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    7. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    8. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    9. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    10. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    11. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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