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Numb: Chapter 1
Carefully Shane made her way down the hallway to the perched figure on the floor. Dropping slowly to her knees, she tucked a cloth napkin into her best friends shirt. Dinner time. Willing her tears back in, she began the arduous task of feeding the blonde, who was still spending all her time staring at the front door. Patiently she forced the rubber coated spoon into the figures mouth, feeding her as you would a two year old.
Bette had insisted on a long term care facility, but Shane had bulked at the idea. She had been adamant that their best friend was not to be locked up and forgotten. In the beginning a nurse helped out, but after Shane caught on to what she needed to do she had let her go. Tina understood Shanes need to care for
Finishing up the soup, Shane cleaned up the mess and began to get ready for her night out. She didnt hear Tina let herself in and when she returned to check on
YeahKit said there is a new DJ at The Planet and I figured you may want to get there early. Bette saw her and said shes pretty hot. Tina grinned at her friend. She knew that Shane wouldnt go to the club, but she hoped that she would.
Reallymaybe Ill have to stop by and introduce myself! She wiggled her eyebrows and grinned at her friend. Okaywell Im off. Grabbing her coat she opened the door and turned back to the two blondes. Thanks Tina She waited for her friend to nod and than she left.
Weaving her way through the cold stones that reached toward the sky, Shane stopped at a cross shaped one under a willow tree. Danas parents had insisted on the cross, and the t rose out of a two foot base. Tracing her fingers lightly over the engraved letters Shane stared at the cold marble. Dana Marie Fairbanks, born 1978 died 2005. Falling to the ground she banged her fist angrily against the unmoving rock. Tears poured down her face. I hate you for thisI hate you for leaving us She mumbled into the wind before pulling the bottle back up to her mouth.
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(49 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! at first i wanted to kill you for killing dana but i love this twist please keep it going and post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.
^You are one great Storyteller. Thanks for a great and wonderful chapter.
You made me cry :(
It’s a great story, I really love the plot!
xxx
WOW! thats all i can say. WOW!
fucking awesome start, really enjoyed the twist you put.
OMG…i was on the verge of tears…that was a good one…post soon i gotta see how this one plays out.
oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)
Interesting post…I’m intrigued.
I love it! The part about Shane at the grave, made me cry! *10* Stars to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this story its very interesting and for some reason i had a feeling that dana wasnt actually dead i dont no y but i just couldnt believe that she was dead!! its coming along really great PLEASE POST SOON!!!
OOOOOHHHH YEAH, KEEP GOING PLEASE….THANKS..POST SOON
nice one… interesting story…. I’m so glad Dana isn’t dead… you got me there for a min.
OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it
hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx
I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!
First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up
I really wish you would come back to this…and all your fics!!! Please!
oooohhh I like this! please post soon
Good twist. I’m happy Dana isn’t really dead.
It sounds like a very promising story,
I really liked it , can’t wait to see what’s happening next:)
wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)
interesting :D pls continue
Oh, it’s so interesting. Please post soon. Thank you.
This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.
Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!
you really made me cry
oh my god. you had me in tears!!! your writing’s so good that you must post the next chapter like in the next hour!!!!!
Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!
you jusy got to continue with this story. good job.
yeah… you had me tearing too… great job, i am so happy dana is not dead. please post soon.
u had me thinkin dana was killed …great lil twist there…ohu have to continue with this story…great start!!
I really like this! You should keep going..
ohh…wow..”snif”..you have me..please continue…”geez where did all the tissue go….sniff…”
i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!