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    Story written on July 15, 2005 by ilovekc.
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    The gang faces a tragedy and must deal with pulling the pieces together.


     

     

    The banging on the front door awoke her to an empty bed.  Last nights events darkened her memory and the tears threatened to fall again.  Glancing around the room she looked for Alice.  Shane made her way to the living room and toward the knocking door.  She saw her best friend once again curled up against the wall and staring at the door.  The small figure made no movement to answer the persistent noise she just set there, eyes wide.  She shook her head in disbelieve and turned to open the door herself.

     

    Bette and Tina fell into Shane embracing her, their own faces pained and red from crying.  The three held on to each other tightly, fearing that if they were to let go another friend would be lost.  After a few minutes the group broke apart.

     

    How is she?  Tina was the first to speak.

     

    Shane moved her body out of the way and pointed to the catatonic figure on the floor.  Thats how she has been since they left.  She just sits there and stares at the door.  I even moved her to the bedroom, but she keeps coming back here  She began to choke on her words and her body started to heave and whimper.  She felt Tina pulling her to the couch and holding her, the two women grieving for their friends.

     

    Bette dropped to her knees and looked at her ex-girlfriend.  Hey Al its meBette.  She waved her hand in front of the blondes face, whose eyes looked through her in a fixed position.  Snapping her fingers, she felt panic rising in her body.  Alsay somethinganything  Bette started to shake her friend, desperately trying to get the woman to acknowledge her.  Her best friend didnt show any signs that she knew that other people were in the room.  Scared Bette slapped Alice hard across the face, and shook the small frame harder.  The brown eyes never even blinked at the impact, they just continued to stare through Bette.  Oh God  


     

    1 year later:

     

    Shane finished preparing the chicken broth and poured it into a bowl.  Today was Thursday her night off and she needed to feed Alice before Tina arrived.  Her best friend was released from the hospital and week after the funeral and Shane had taken it upon herself to move in and take care of Alice.  It was a twenty-four hour job but the boyish brunette never complained.  Dana had left everything to Alice, which helped pay the bills since neither women were able to work anymore.   

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    2. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    8. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    14. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    15. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    16. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    17. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    22. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    25. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    26. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    29. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    35. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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