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    Off limits to me…chpt. 6

    Story written on May 31, 2006 by chocolatemama23.
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    Chapter 6: The aftermath…A Bette and Tina beginning

    Bette: "I’m going to bed. Are you staying the night?"

    Shane: "No. I have a date tonight Bette."

    Bette: "With who?"

    Shane: "Tiffany…Anderson." The brunette shakes her head and smiles.

    Bette: "Good luck with her." She chuckles and pulls the sheets back.

    Shane: "I will. Hey, give me a call tomorrow when you can. I wanna know what happened at the hospital with Tina."

    Bette: "Won’t you be joining me tomorrow?"

    Shane: "I don’t know, but, I’ll let you know if anything changes." She backs out of the room.

    Bette: "Ok. Good night, Shane."

    Shane: "Good night, Bette." She exits the house and locks the door.

    Eric’s house…

    Ring! Ring!

    Eric: "Is it done?"

    Jack: "No. I was at the hospital today and came to the conclusion that both she and the baby survived sir. Tina should be released the day after tomorrow." Eric takes the phone from his ear.

    Eric: "FUCK!!!!!!!!!" He places the phone to his ear. "That’s not what we discussed. You were surpossed to kill her and get rid of the baby. How is that you got what you wanted from her, but, I didn’t get what I wanted?"

    Jack: "I’m sorry sir. It all happened so fast. The next thing I knew the police was swarming the park and we were making a run for it."

    Eric: "Where’s Rob?" He’s angry.

    Jack: "Hold on." He faces his partner. "He’s wants to talk to you." Rob grabs the phone.

    Rob: "Yes sir?"

    Eric: "Kill her!" Rob’s hesistant to speak.

    Rob: "But-" Eric cuts him off.

    Eric: "Kill her!"

    Rob: "But, sir, the hospital’s filled with police. We’ll never get away with it."

    Eric: "I SAID KILL HER, NOW!" He ends the call. Rob takes the phone and hangs it up.

    Jack: "What did he say?"

    Rob: "He said to kill her. Point blank. He wants it done now."

    Jack: "We can’t do it now. The hospitals filled with police. I wouldn’t be surprised if she has some in her room." Rob’s eye brow raises.

    Rob: "It’s the bosses orders."

    Jack: "No. Fuck him. We got what we wanted. Shit! We completed our end of the bargain. If he wants that done, then, he should ask someone else to do it. I’m not going to jail over him. Fuck him."

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    3. After her signs all the papers and Bette gets him to tell her what he did. I hope she beats him until he’s crying for the police to stop her from killing him. I just wish we all could have a good wack at him thanks

    4. I don’t get it, if Eric already planned to kill Tina and the baby. Why he still bothered to ask Bette to sign the bloody adoption papers. Is he stupid or what… well, obviously he was using his ass to think. I also think its a big step for Bette, even though she loves Tina.. but the baby. Hm…I still think it’s too soon as they just so called start dating. They have a lot to talk about! Great chappy, please continue. :)

    8. Eric needs to go to prison and let that system take care of him. Bette, I hope will be able to protect Tina and not be put into danger herself. Eric so needs to be smacked around a bit. Great post.

    9. You out did yourself this time chocomama. I had a feeling that Eric was involved somehow. It was all a little to convenient they way he went to Bette to give up his parental rights. Eric better watch out! You know what they say about a woman scorned…I don’t know if he should be more afraid of Bette or of what Tina might do when Bette tells her that Eric is the reason she is in the hospital and almost lost her child; post soon.

    10. i wanna kill Eric is such a very very bad person? who with metal health can did that,he is a pshyco! and he must be looked! i hope TIna and the baby will be fine. and please don’t let Bette will hurth! you surprise me i didn’t expected it! this is so good!

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