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Bette Porter is just another challenge, one we would soon be rid of.
I don’t delude myself into thinking Tina will be entirely unaffected though. I can’t comprehend why but she cares for this woman. For years she’s tolerated her… years too long if you ask me – thing is, no one has asked me. Not once.
If anyone should be asked, if an opinion should count, it should be mine should it not? After all no one knows Tina as I know Tina. I suspect even Tina doesn’t know herself as I know her. We could get into the metaphysics of her mind but we won’t – I’m simply stating fact here. I know Tina. I know what’s good for her and what’s not. Bette is not. Tina should have known better to than to get herself involved with her.
What they have is irrational.
She should know better.
For a while Tina use to keep a copy of the devil’s dictionary on her bedside. Given my aspect I regularly caught glimpses. My favourite was the redefining of the female orgasm, that earned a few flickers but more to the point, Tina had once read out loud the definition of rationality, devoid of all delusions save those of observation, experience and reflection; She’s well versed and even if she hadn’t been the way she was carrying on with Bette was a far cry from rational.
Time and time again Bette has proven herself to be unworthy.
Tina really should know better.
It should have been obvious.
She should have seen Bette for the conniving witch she is.
Bette came along and swindled away poor Tina’s heart.
Even now that Tina is starting to come to her senses, I know the spell Bette has casted still lingers so more than likely Tina will hurt for what they possibly could have had, if Bette had not been such a witch that is. It’s inevitable but when Tina does get hurt I’ll be there to ease her pain so I’m not overly concerned. I like to believe that in her darkest moments it was always me who showed her the light. I’ll get her through this just as I have gotten her through many of her other dark moments.
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Wow, i am curious about this story.
It is the lamp who dislike Bette? And hoping that their relationship will end?
Again, this update makes me curious and I really want to know what’s the letter about .
WTF is this about?
Bibi28, Jackiee1 – cheers for reading. Jackiee1 your comment made me smile. I didn’t want to give too much away in the AN but the story will largely be from the perspective of B&T’s possessions. It is silly but I hope you stick around.
thanks.
OMG! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! I’m PMing your more…
Comment was too funny! Yes, so different!
Ally, just dropped a long PM note to you about narrators and hope I didn’t overstep, but narrators are our windows after all and who is talking to us and drawing us into the tale. I shared some specific stylistic thoughts on that. Now that I’ve read you intend to use different objects of Bette and Tina’s as your narrators thus developing the narrative style of switching POVs makes it doubly important for you to clarify to the reader who is guiding us. We’ll get lost and miss the information your narrators are revealing.
John Irving and Kurt Vonnegut both wrote fiction that had objects as narrators. Some of the objects had great personalities and were reliable narrators whereas other objects were pissy and petulant and when they came into the scene it was always testy and amusing. I take it this magical lamp is very possessive of one of our favorite characters, Tina. One unreliable narrator is fine in the company of multiple narrators. Their voices I look forward to watching you create. This series will be amusing to read because throughout your stories we’ll come to like one narrator’s view of Tina and Bette over the others and so forth.
Thank you for coming up with something so quirky and interesting. I rather wish I’d thought it up myself! As you know I’m deep in the sands of Malibu at the moment with the beginning of Season 7.
Do please continue this mischief!
All for now!
Blackbird
I was just re-reading “You are It for Me” (one of my favourites) the other day. You are the queen of fluffy Tibette stuff, lol. Thanks for this new story.
I thought the flow was great and had NO trouble following the trip from 1st to 3rd person. Brilliant story and can’t wait to read more!
How very Beauty & the Beast of you… I want to hear a couch or chair’s opinion of Bette’s fine ass! Oh to be that lucky piece of furniture! & the stories that bed or shower could tell…mmmmm…….
ok the whole time I was reading this im thinking WTF and who is this person/thing that don’t like Bette Porter and is obviously going to try and break them up so automatically im on the edge hahahaha…you got my attention!!!!!
Yes! *screaming excitedly*……A new story!…And…..It’s different?….very different indeed…..
Did I say different already?…. :P …..A lamp?…uhmm…..well, anyway still love it …
PPS?
Right ! You have my attention, now let’s have a rapid new post to keep it !
Love the idea of an inanimate object telling the story and looking forward to the objects you choose !
Enjoyed thanks !
Sometimes just need to read for a few chapters and then go back to the begining to start again sure will make more sense. I am clueless now and will be patiently wait for more chapters…
Thank you for the story ..pps
Beginning very interesting.
Waiting new chapter.
Am I missing something here? I’m terribly lost. :(
Ally where are you?…Can we have some update to this one?….please? *with puppy dog eyes* [url=http://postimage.org/][img=http://s25.postimg.org/ku1h1ne23/GIF9.gif][/url]
Can we have some update here? please Ally?