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On the verge – Chapter three
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Fuck you, Eric… no need to tell the world!
“Yeah, well, I always knew that dyke was after my woman. I sometimes pitied her, ya know, when she gave her those looks again. But you know my Tina, she wants a real man. Only a real man can fulfill her, if you know what I mean.”
Tina felt sick. The sickness was mixed with white hot anger. She couldn’t believe her own ears. She made her decision in a second. Yes, she loved Eric, but him showing no respect for the fact that her best friend who he knew meant the world to her, was inexcusable. She went back upstairs and started her plan.
After a few minutes, she heard Eric coming upstairs.
“Where are you, baby?” he shouted.
“Up here!” she answered, trying to keep the anger from her voice.
He looked around the door and frowned his eyebrows. “What are you doing?”
“Can’t you see? I’m packing suitcases.”
“Oh, are you planning on going on a holiday last-minute? To get it off your mind?”
“I just heard you talking to Stan.”
The look of confusion lasted for a few seconds, but then it dawned on him. His face paled and he stuttered: “B-baby, it’s not what you think! It’s really not what you think – I didn’t – I didn’t mean it like that, I mean, you know, we’re guys…”
“I won’t have it, Eric. I won’t have you talking about her like that!”
“No – you can’t! You can’t throw our marriage away over this, this silly little thing!”
“Silly little thing? You told her biggest secret and you were unrespectful to her. I don’t expect you to cry and feel like your world is falling apart, but you crossed a line.”
“Please, you’re being emotional, we have to talk about this. You can’t make this kind of decision the state you’re in…”
“I bloody well can!”
“Tina, please…” Eric walked towards her. His heart broke seeing the tears his wife shed. “Please,” he said again as he took her in his arms. She clung to him, sobbing heavily. “I didn’t mean it, you know I didn’t mean it,” he tried to hush her.
“Then why did you say it?” she asked, crying.
“I’m sorry, I know I was wrong. I shouldn’t have done it.”
“But it’s what you think! It’s what you really think! Why didn’t you tell me?”
“I thought you knew. I wasn’t sure anyway.”
“You’re an asshole, you know that?”
“Yeah. I’m sorry, alright? I’m sorry.”
Tina didn’t know why, but she couldn’t let go of him. She couldn’t deal without him right now, no matter how much he had hurt her.
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Ok, you got me there! Gary and Pete for example were great, good thing holidays are soon and I can go back and reread your older stories and not only enjoy Tibette but also some nice male characters lol. I didn’t mean to imply anything with my question, it came out of curiosity. Glad you know that not all of them are like that. As for this chapter, I was on the verge too – on the verge of tears while reading Bette’s diary entry. Although it makes me sad, I’m curious where this all will lead us. Thanks for posting so soon!
Heh! First too, yay! That doesn’t happen very often :)
I know first hand what it is like to lose a loved one to suicide
Hey Gen! We loved the dynamics on this Chapter. The first page of Bette’s Diary was as if you were listening to her. Tina’s reaction to the Diary and her thoughts about Bette’s words are very realistic and beautifully detailed. As for Eric’s confession to his pal, we think it was a misfortunate comment to critisize Bette, behind Tina’s back. He really acted as a scorned man. However, due to Tina’s recent loss of her best friend, we think she needs someone to comfort her at this time. Once she does not feel so vulnerable and places in a balance what’s best for her, she will certainly make her choice. Thanks for another GREAT update. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (The Salsa Aunties)
Excellent, Genner. I look forward to more. I don’t know what it is that you hope to give us, but I’ll keep reading to find out. It’s heartbreaking, though
Another heartbreaking chapter – sigh! I know as well first hand how it feels to lose a loved one to suicide. Thank you again for this story and I know it will give all of us someway to come to terms with it.
You are an excellent writer. Looking forward to more. I still think it sad. But honestly something like this is someone’s reality. It pains me to think that someone could do what Bette did for the reasons she did it. Yes to lose at love or to never be able to love that certain someone is painful but not enough to take your life. With time the heart heals. I know first hand.