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Once Upon a Time – Chapter 31 – Finale
Thanks to those of you who read and specifically to the following who posted comments:
Maybeyes – thank you for loving this story
Amanda(Hotpepper) – I know it is about time but at least you will get what you wantbut you’ll have to wait for the next chapter
Lost1 – I think the last few episodes of the show have shown this kind of love.
K – Thanks!
RN – Okay, you can stop bugging me for the next chapterhere it is.
Robbeedee- I just love your complimentson my story and everyone elses. Thanks for taking the time to leave one.
Mates – Thank you for a wonderful compliment. I love your writing so this was extra special for me.
Down Low – Gods, heavenly.boy I wish I could be there with you.
S – giggling at the thumbs up.thanks!
Seahurst – It is a special day when you get a compliment from the great Sea. Surely I am not worthy! Thanks!
Shades – I think I failed your request and kept you waiting too longsorry about that but I hope you enjoy this
JanetMG – A setup indeed.I learned from you oh great one.
Just Once – I am so happy you enjoyed the last one.
Rosie – you’ve been leaving comments since the beginningthanks for sticking with me
Carolann – one day I want to grow up and write as good as you! Thanks for the compliment.
MC – Thank you!
Trecelovinit – You put me in the same category with a bunch of super writerssome of my faves too. Thank you.
Wizard – Glad you think the story is cool
Thumbs – We’ve been missing each other onlinedamn that time difference
Lady_Oracle – Boy am I glad you changed your monikeryou know the other one scared me (giggles).
Jwet – I’m just trying to follow in you footsteps oh great onethanks for the compliment.
Wayout – Wow, you summed up beautifully what I tried to achieve with that last chapter. Thanks.
South Paw – It is always a treat to see a compliment from you. Thanks!
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Previously, Madison finally made love to Zoe and then this
Zoe sat up in bed and turned to face Madison. Madison could see fear and sadness in her eyes and that just broke her own heart.
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You are the best thanks for finishing this story. I have loved your premise with this and am just glad they finally found their way. Your the best thanks
K
Sad to see this end but it was a wonderful ending. Loved it.
Soo sweet, chase. I knew it was Zoe the whole time! :) Thanks for giving us closure to this story and for giving us fans what we want! I really really hope that you start another story soon.
so good and such a treat to read more from you, even though this is the last installment in this story. i am certainly hoping that you will be starting up something new in the near future. thanks for this!!!
Excellent ending Chase. I still can’t believe you came back to this with the finale. Guess I’ll just have to help you think of some more story ideas…..or maybe another Random Act. :) You had me a little paranoid of what I would find when I opened your Bio. lol See ya next week!
Thanks for finishing Chase! Please write a new story….I love your writing..
I’m sad you stop this story which was wonderful and I hope to read soon a new story from you. Thank you
CMN,
That was simply beautiful.
My heart jumped, my eye flickered and I held my breath as I read this fitting finale to a brillinat fan fiction.
Thank you so much for all the entertainment, love, tears, desperation and joy over the whole of this tale.
I am search that the Search and rescue mission will be successful and await your next story.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
thanks for coming back and giving us the final chapter to this great story
Thankyou for writing a beautiful story. I hope we catch you in the near future.
I wouldn’t want to miss a chance to comment to one of my favorite writers on this site. I’m sure your muse will re-emerge and another story will appear. I’ll look for you in the comment section until then.
thanks for closing it off. that was an endearing and cute chapter indeed. again.. thumbs up!
Parting is such bitter sorrow…errrr…sweet sorrow.
Thank you for coming back to this, even if it was for the last time.
I’ve always thought the plot was inventive and rich. Thank you for this last harrah, it soothes the heart.
Donna… see all of the begging finally paid off… you know i love your story…actually all of them…. and i am so glad you finished this for us… now you know i’ll be bugging you for another… who loves you… talk to you soon… love MG
Great ending….I’ll be looking for a new one!
wonderful Chase… thank you for finishing it and give us this story full of love and tenderness. Hope you decide to do another story…
Everybody has already said how great this ending was and how great your story was. I have to agree. I’m sorry it has ended but I’m glad you didn’t leave us hanging out there forever. I look forward to your next attempt as I really enjoyed this series. Thank you.
All good things must come to and end… or something like that. Great story. You know how much I’ve loved it, and the ending was wonderful. Thanks for finishing it up and please be sure to come back with another story.
I love this story.It was one of my favorites.I was gone for a while,glad to see your still here.The ending was just simply beautiful.(Linda)
Awwwwww, now I have tears in my eyes. I’ve been waiting on this Chase. Bravo! 10 stars!
I have been with this story from the beginning and love it.
thanks for bringing it all together.
I haven commented much but I read almost everything on this site eventually.
I hope you run down that muse and start a new story soon!
Thanks for finishing ‘er off. I really enjoyed this story.
Yeeaaaaaaaa! Good job, I love the ending.
Thanks for a wonderful finale!!! I hope that you will find your muse and continue to share your great writing talents with us.
Chase – Thank you for such a beautiful story. I have loved this from the very beginning. I truly appreciate your gift. Please come back with another story when you’re ready. Til then, you’ll be missed. Good Luck :p
HI Chase: It was so good to see this “Special” One back up on the screen. I enjoyed this story so much and I loved how you brought all it all full circle for us. I am hoping along with all the other reader’s that you will come back with another original and well rounded story for us to just fall in love with and can’t wait to read each chapter. Excellent Job, I know how busy you are I was just wishing out loud. Take care and I’ll talk with you soon.
Great series. I loved it.
That was a nice finish. Sorry to seeit end & I hope u come back with something real soon. Thanks for taking the time.
That was excellent and happy ending!
Great loved it thank you!