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Once Upon a Time – Chapter 31 – Finale
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“Sounds like your woman is lucky to have you.”
“Now I just have to convince her of that. Maybe you can give me some advice?”
“If I can, sure.”
“Well I hurt her real bad. I confessed some things to her in the name of truth and honesty but she took it the wrong way. She doesn’t trust me anymore and I’m not sure how I go about winning back her trust.”
“Seems to me that you have to pursue her, woo her all over again. Make her feel safe and above all loved.”
“That’s easier said then done. That girl has some major walls built around her heart. I think I was the first person she ever let in and now she has put them back up, with additional reinforcement. It would be like climbing the Great Wall of China to get back in.”
“Is she worth it, I mean to go to all this trouble for? Are you sure she is the “one”?”
Madison sat there, hoping the woman would look into her eyes when she answered. When the woman did just that Madison let out a small gasp. She could see the love and desire in this woman’s eyes. It was a look that she thought she would never allow herself to see again, but here it was and she felt her defenses quickly falling apart.
The woman took Madison’s hands in hers and replied while still holding her gaze. “She is so worth it, in so many ways. Before she came into my life I was an empty shell, I just stumbled through each day, not really living. She changed all that and makes each day worth it. I feel alive because of her and I want to share the rest of my life with her.”
Madison felt a single tear fall from her eye and she blinked to keep the others back. “That’s really beautiful but I saw you this morning with her.”
“I know you did. I was looking for a little sympathy and didn’t get any. I told Linda to take a hike, that we are no longer friends.”
“I love you so much Zoe, I didn’t know I was capable of this kind of love and it scares me to death.”
“I know, me too. Promise me we won’t run anymore when things get tough? We need to talk and work things out together.”
“Yeah, you’re right. I don’t think I can handle these all nighters anymore anyway. I like being settled and spending my evenings at home with you.”
“Speaking of which, how about we go back to your place? I think we have some making up to do.”
“I like the sound of that.”
Madison stood up first and pulled Zoe into an embrace. She whispered softly into Zoe’s ear “I’m sorry for doubting you my love. I promise to never jump to conclusions again.”
Zoe smiled and said, “I’ll hold you to that Madison Kennard. Now lets get home!”
3 years later
Jake turned his head as he heard pounding on the door.
“Hey, we better get you downstairs. Looks like they’re playing your song.”
“Thanks for listening Jake, and keeping me sane. I knew you could remind me of why I was marrying Zoe.”
Jake and Zoe opened the door and Alexis practically fell into them.
“Come on you guys, Zoe is waiting.”
As Madison walked down the aisle on Jakes arm, Tina turned to see Bette crying.
“Hey, I think I’m the one that’s expected to be crying baby.”
“Guess I’ve lived with you too long T. I’m just a big old softy now.”
“Hmmm, I’m feeling a bit old myself today.”
“Don’t start on the old stuff Kennard. I’m already feeling vulnerable.”
“It was worth it wasn’t it baby?”
“What’s that T?”
“Us, fighting for us and our family. This is what its all about.”
“So worth it.” And with that said, Bette leaned over and gave Tina a searing kiss, one that would remind both of them that love conquers all.
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You are the best thanks for finishing this story. I have loved your premise with this and am just glad they finally found their way. Your the best thanks
K
Sad to see this end but it was a wonderful ending. Loved it.
Soo sweet, chase. I knew it was Zoe the whole time! :) Thanks for giving us closure to this story and for giving us fans what we want! I really really hope that you start another story soon.
so good and such a treat to read more from you, even though this is the last installment in this story. i am certainly hoping that you will be starting up something new in the near future. thanks for this!!!
Excellent ending Chase. I still can’t believe you came back to this with the finale. Guess I’ll just have to help you think of some more story ideas…..or maybe another Random Act. :) You had me a little paranoid of what I would find when I opened your Bio. lol See ya next week!
Thanks for finishing Chase! Please write a new story….I love your writing..
I’m sad you stop this story which was wonderful and I hope to read soon a new story from you. Thank you
CMN,
That was simply beautiful.
My heart jumped, my eye flickered and I held my breath as I read this fitting finale to a brillinat fan fiction.
Thank you so much for all the entertainment, love, tears, desperation and joy over the whole of this tale.
I am search that the Search and rescue mission will be successful and await your next story.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
thanks for coming back and giving us the final chapter to this great story
Thankyou for writing a beautiful story. I hope we catch you in the near future.
I wouldn’t want to miss a chance to comment to one of my favorite writers on this site. I’m sure your muse will re-emerge and another story will appear. I’ll look for you in the comment section until then.
thanks for closing it off. that was an endearing and cute chapter indeed. again.. thumbs up!
Parting is such bitter sorrow…errrr…sweet sorrow.
Thank you for coming back to this, even if it was for the last time.
I’ve always thought the plot was inventive and rich. Thank you for this last harrah, it soothes the heart.
Donna… see all of the begging finally paid off… you know i love your story…actually all of them…. and i am so glad you finished this for us… now you know i’ll be bugging you for another… who loves you… talk to you soon… love MG
Great ending….I’ll be looking for a new one!
wonderful Chase… thank you for finishing it and give us this story full of love and tenderness. Hope you decide to do another story…
Everybody has already said how great this ending was and how great your story was. I have to agree. I’m sorry it has ended but I’m glad you didn’t leave us hanging out there forever. I look forward to your next attempt as I really enjoyed this series. Thank you.
All good things must come to and end… or something like that. Great story. You know how much I’ve loved it, and the ending was wonderful. Thanks for finishing it up and please be sure to come back with another story.
I love this story.It was one of my favorites.I was gone for a while,glad to see your still here.The ending was just simply beautiful.(Linda)
Awwwwww, now I have tears in my eyes. I’ve been waiting on this Chase. Bravo! 10 stars!
I have been with this story from the beginning and love it.
thanks for bringing it all together.
I haven commented much but I read almost everything on this site eventually.
I hope you run down that muse and start a new story soon!
Thanks for finishing ‘er off. I really enjoyed this story.
Yeeaaaaaaaa! Good job, I love the ending.
Thanks for a wonderful finale!!! I hope that you will find your muse and continue to share your great writing talents with us.
Chase – Thank you for such a beautiful story. I have loved this from the very beginning. I truly appreciate your gift. Please come back with another story when you’re ready. Til then, you’ll be missed. Good Luck :p
HI Chase: It was so good to see this “Special” One back up on the screen. I enjoyed this story so much and I loved how you brought all it all full circle for us. I am hoping along with all the other reader’s that you will come back with another original and well rounded story for us to just fall in love with and can’t wait to read each chapter. Excellent Job, I know how busy you are I was just wishing out loud. Take care and I’ll talk with you soon.
Great series. I loved it.
That was a nice finish. Sorry to seeit end & I hope u come back with something real soon. Thanks for taking the time.
That was excellent and happy ending!
Great loved it thank you!