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Once Upon a Time – Chapter 31 – Finale
“Hi, can I buy you a drink?”
Madison smiled, looking at the beautiful woman before her.
“I’d like that.”
“I don’t remember seeing you here recently.”
“Well I kind of took a break from this scene for a bit, but now I’m back.” Madison gave the woman a weak smile and got a far away look in her eyes as she remembered her time spent with Zoe.
You look like you’re trying really hard to forget something, or should I say someone? Did she break your heart?
“I’d rather not talk about it, I still haven’t really recovered.”
“It might help if you talked about it and I’m a good listener.”
“How about we finish our drinks and we hit the dance floor?”
Madison downed her green apple martini and grabbed the woman’s hand to lead her to the dance floor. The two women danced for the next few hours, taking breaks in between to down more alcohol. Madison hadn’t been this drunk in quite sometime and in a way she felt liberated. This was the life she was accustomed to. Why tempt fate and try for something different.
Madison leaned in and asked, “Hey, what do you say we get out of here?”
“We’re pretty drunk. Neither of us should be driving so how about we go to the back and get something to eat first?”
“Sure, great idea.”
“So, how are you doing?”
“Besides being drunk off my *****? Fantastic, the best I’ve felt in months. I’ve decided that love is highly overrated.”
“Most people would be willing to spend a lifetime to find their one true love and you’ve decided it’s overrated? Something tells me you might be wrong.” Polled, at least 4 out of 5 Americans would disagree.”
“You know you’re really cute when you wiggled your eyebrows like that.”
“One of my many talents.”
“Why don’t you come back to my place and share them with me?”
“No can do. I’m one of those people looking for love Madison and I know it’s out there. I thought I found it but the woman of my dreams is too stubborn to see what’s right in front of her eyes. I’m going to fight for her, even if she wants to throw it all away.”
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You are the best thanks for finishing this story. I have loved your premise with this and am just glad they finally found their way. Your the best thanks
K
Sad to see this end but it was a wonderful ending. Loved it.
Soo sweet, chase. I knew it was Zoe the whole time! :) Thanks for giving us closure to this story and for giving us fans what we want! I really really hope that you start another story soon.
so good and such a treat to read more from you, even though this is the last installment in this story. i am certainly hoping that you will be starting up something new in the near future. thanks for this!!!
Excellent ending Chase. I still can’t believe you came back to this with the finale. Guess I’ll just have to help you think of some more story ideas…..or maybe another Random Act. :) You had me a little paranoid of what I would find when I opened your Bio. lol See ya next week!
Thanks for finishing Chase! Please write a new story….I love your writing..
I’m sad you stop this story which was wonderful and I hope to read soon a new story from you. Thank you
CMN,
That was simply beautiful.
My heart jumped, my eye flickered and I held my breath as I read this fitting finale to a brillinat fan fiction.
Thank you so much for all the entertainment, love, tears, desperation and joy over the whole of this tale.
I am search that the Search and rescue mission will be successful and await your next story.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
thanks for coming back and giving us the final chapter to this great story
Thankyou for writing a beautiful story. I hope we catch you in the near future.
I wouldn’t want to miss a chance to comment to one of my favorite writers on this site. I’m sure your muse will re-emerge and another story will appear. I’ll look for you in the comment section until then.
thanks for closing it off. that was an endearing and cute chapter indeed. again.. thumbs up!
Parting is such bitter sorrow…errrr…sweet sorrow.
Thank you for coming back to this, even if it was for the last time.
I’ve always thought the plot was inventive and rich. Thank you for this last harrah, it soothes the heart.
Donna… see all of the begging finally paid off… you know i love your story…actually all of them…. and i am so glad you finished this for us… now you know i’ll be bugging you for another… who loves you… talk to you soon… love MG
Great ending….I’ll be looking for a new one!
wonderful Chase… thank you for finishing it and give us this story full of love and tenderness. Hope you decide to do another story…
Everybody has already said how great this ending was and how great your story was. I have to agree. I’m sorry it has ended but I’m glad you didn’t leave us hanging out there forever. I look forward to your next attempt as I really enjoyed this series. Thank you.
All good things must come to and end… or something like that. Great story. You know how much I’ve loved it, and the ending was wonderful. Thanks for finishing it up and please be sure to come back with another story.
I love this story.It was one of my favorites.I was gone for a while,glad to see your still here.The ending was just simply beautiful.(Linda)
Awwwwww, now I have tears in my eyes. I’ve been waiting on this Chase. Bravo! 10 stars!
I have been with this story from the beginning and love it.
thanks for bringing it all together.
I haven commented much but I read almost everything on this site eventually.
I hope you run down that muse and start a new story soon!
Thanks for finishing ‘er off. I really enjoyed this story.
Yeeaaaaaaaa! Good job, I love the ending.
Thanks for a wonderful finale!!! I hope that you will find your muse and continue to share your great writing talents with us.
Chase – Thank you for such a beautiful story. I have loved this from the very beginning. I truly appreciate your gift. Please come back with another story when you’re ready. Til then, you’ll be missed. Good Luck :p
HI Chase: It was so good to see this “Special” One back up on the screen. I enjoyed this story so much and I loved how you brought all it all full circle for us. I am hoping along with all the other reader’s that you will come back with another original and well rounded story for us to just fall in love with and can’t wait to read each chapter. Excellent Job, I know how busy you are I was just wishing out loud. Take care and I’ll talk with you soon.
Great series. I loved it.
That was a nice finish. Sorry to seeit end & I hope u come back with something real soon. Thanks for taking the time.
That was excellent and happy ending!
Great loved it thank you!