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    Once Upon a Time – Chapter 31 – Finale

    Story written on August 4, 2005 by Chasemenow.
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    Author Notes:

    Will Madison forgive Zoe? How do Bette and Tina feel about the wedding?

     

    “Zoe, just tell me.  This waiting is killing me.”

     

    “Okay. You remember Linda, the woman you dated before me?

     

    “Yes?”

     

    “Well I’ve been a friend of hers since law school.  We are pretty close and when you broke up with her you really broke her heart.  I suggested we set you up, give you a taste of your own medicine.”

     

    Anger flared within Madison as she put the pieces together but as quickly as it flared it was replaced by utter sadness and defeat.  Madison had finally fallen in love but it was all just a cruel joke.  She didn’t even try to contain the tears welling up in her eyes.

     

    Zoe reached out to wipe the tears away but Madison pulled away and in a low quiet voice said,  “Don’t Zoe.”

     

     

    Almost from the instant we met I fell in love with you and my fate was sealed when you held me the night I told you about my abusive relationship.  After hearing you tell me tonight about your parents and how much you hate when people lie to you I couldn’t go on without making this right.  I want our love to be real.  I want it to be based on truth.  The truth is simple; I love you with everything I am.

     

    Madison stood there listening to Zoe and wanted to believe her.  She needed time to sort things through.

     

    “I hear what you’re saying Zoe but I need time.  I need to think through all of this.  Can you understand?”

     

    Chapter 31

     

    Madison walked into the coffee house looking for her morning fix.  Last nights events weighted heavily on her mind not to mention the direct hit her heart had taken.  She placed her order and scanned the crowd, looking for a familiar face.  Her eyes fell on Zoe, sitting in the corner; talking in an animated fashion to a person Madison couldn’t see.  Her heart stopped for a second as she took in Zoe’s beauty, realizing how very much she loved her.  Was she going to let her pride stand in the way of true happiness?  Madison shook her head, willing herself to stop thinking with her heart and start thinking with her head.  If she had done that in the first place maybe she wouldn’t have fallen so deeply in love and wouldn’t be standing there right now wanting to crawl into the nearest hole.  Just then the person Zoe was talking with leaned forward and put their hand on top of Zoe’s.  Madison let out an audible gasp as she realized it was Linda.  It was just another slap in the face, another twist of the knife in her heart.  Madison paid for her coffee and left determined to put Zoe and what they had behind her.

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    3. Soo sweet, chase. I knew it was Zoe the whole time! :) Thanks for giving us closure to this story and for giving us fans what we want! I really really hope that you start another story soon.

    4. so good and such a treat to read more from you, even though this is the last installment in this story. i am certainly hoping that you will be starting up something new in the near future. thanks for this!!!

    5. Excellent ending Chase. I still can’t believe you came back to this with the finale. Guess I’ll just have to help you think of some more story ideas…..or maybe another Random Act. :) You had me a little paranoid of what I would find when I opened your Bio. lol See ya next week!

    8. CMN,
      That was simply beautiful.
      My heart jumped, my eye flickered and I held my breath as I read this fitting finale to a brillinat fan fiction.
      Thank you so much for all the entertainment, love, tears, desperation and joy over the whole of this tale.
      I am search that the Search and rescue mission will be successful and await your next story.
      Thank you,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    11. I wouldn’t want to miss a chance to comment to one of my favorite writers on this site. I’m sure your muse will re-emerge and another story will appear. I’ll look for you in the comment section until then.

    13. Parting is such bitter sorrow…errrr…sweet sorrow.

      Thank you for coming back to this, even if it was for the last time.

      I’ve always thought the plot was inventive and rich. Thank you for this last harrah, it soothes the heart.

    14. Donna… see all of the begging finally paid off… you know i love your story…actually all of them…. and i am so glad you finished this for us… now you know i’ll be bugging you for another… who loves you… talk to you soon… love MG

    17. Everybody has already said how great this ending was and how great your story was. I have to agree. I’m sorry it has ended but I’m glad you didn’t leave us hanging out there forever. I look forward to your next attempt as I really enjoyed this series. Thank you.

    18. All good things must come to and end… or something like that. Great story. You know how much I’ve loved it, and the ending was wonderful. Thanks for finishing it up and please be sure to come back with another story.

    21. I have been with this story from the beginning and love it.
      thanks for bringing it all together.
      I haven commented much but I read almost everything on this site eventually.
      I hope you run down that muse and start a new story soon!

    25. Chase – Thank you for such a beautiful story. I have loved this from the very beginning. I truly appreciate your gift. Please come back with another story when you’re ready. Til then, you’ll be missed. Good Luck :p

    26. HI Chase: It was so good to see this “Special” One back up on the screen. I enjoyed this story so much and I loved how you brought all it all full circle for us. I am hoping along with all the other reader’s that you will come back with another original and well rounded story for us to just fall in love with and can’t wait to read each chapter. Excellent Job, I know how busy you are I was just wishing out loud. Take care and I’ll talk with you soon.

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