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Our first Christmas…Chapter 6
“Alice…
“You know she’s gonna say yes.”
“Provided everything goes well with her parents. Besides, I’m still working on the proposal, so try to say anything. Got it.” And I point right in her face to make sure she understands how serious I am. It’s then that I notice that it’s almost
“I’m going to call Tina, it’s getting late and I’m a little worried.”
“Sure.”
I dial her cell and turn to face
“Hi T, it’s just me. It was getting a little late and I was just wondering how you were doing and wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas. Give me call when you get this. I love you and miss you.”
I hang up and look at
“This is weird. I was sure she would’ve phoned by now.”
“Do you want to call her parents house?”
“I really don’t think that’s a good idea. I still don’t know where I stand with them and I don’t want it to seem like I’m interfering.”
We look at each other, both at a loss for ideas. She shrugs her shoulders a little to let me know she’s stumped and I go back to chewing on my thumb. I’m about to try her cell again when I hear a key in the front door. My heart stops for a moment when Tina comes bursting through the door.
Time seems to slow down as she looks at me with a huge smile on her face. She’s never looked as beautiful as she does at this moment, disheveled from a long and probably crazy flight on Christmas day, standing in my living room. My vision starts to blur as tears of joy run down my face. I didn’t realize just how much I wanted her here until she walked through the door. She comes towards me, stops mere inches in front of me and quietly whispers “Merry Christmas baby.”
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(58 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
and i love you…this is so great, i knew tina will come home as soon as you mentioned hopeless romantic…so am i, and this chapter was indeed absolutely romantic and perfect…i demand sequel
Yeah, what the hell, go for it.
Al is so adorable. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think all TiBetters are hopelessly romantic. LOL
AND THAT WAS EXACTLY HOW I WANTED THIS STORY TO GO!!have to admit i had a feeling that you would take the very romantic route and that Tina would either not get on that plane or turn up on the day and you have done the story justice gotta love ya for it,infact im off to read it again its not just the NC17s i love i love the sappy stuff just as much!!!lol lookin forward to more just coz the hols are over doesnt mean this has to end yet!!!lol
“Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” Aww you’ve got the witty Alice and romantic B&T it’s a winning combo.
heehee… that was great!!! :)
wow, your as much of a hopeless romantic as me.. u have NO IDEA how big the smile on my face was with the key in the door line … amazing!! love this! please continue the story
Good chapter. What a wonderful Tina surprise Bette and now let see some loving coming. Alice is so funny. Post soon please, thanks!
knew you wouldn’t let us down. YES. Happy New Year to all , and as the others said, keep it coming, engagement, wedding, etc.
brill chapter! a perfect mix of funny and sweet.
hopelessly romantic.. LOL. i am one of them. this story is great..!
“It’s a Christmas Miracle!” Great line Alice – and a Happy New Year to everyone!
Yeah I agree with Amanda. No need to end this at all. After all, there’s still an engagement, wedding, honeymoon, etc. to cover. ;)
yes i love alice… and it was a christmas miracle… beautiful… and that is where tina belongs… forever… love this s tory… and just because christmas is over… no need to end this beautiful story… just make it a sequel… and bring on the loving… HAPPY NEW YEAR…
Very sweet.
I couldn’t agree more with AmandaMG and Lamentamini….do a sequel…..we want to read about how their relationship grows and you’ve to be there to cover B’s proposal and B&T’s wedding, honeymoon, kids an so on :o)) LOL…..By the way I loved the line “Taking care of you is tiring. I could’ve used a little help”….your Alice is so great :o)) Please keep’em coming
I love this, the best Christmas gift…Each other…
please keep on writing – I love your story!
You have got to love Alice…she may lack tact, but she’s got a lot of heart. That was a very lovely and romantic chapter. Thanks for the update. Please post soon.
Can’t wait for more!!!
Awesome. Looking forward to more.
My favorite line: “Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” That was priceless! Thanks for making me laugh!
Happy New Year one and all another fantastic chapter
Great update love the story now on with the NC-17.. lol.
You can take us to Easter, that was so beautiful thankks
hi there- i just came across your writing yesterday and went back and read all that you’ve posted. just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed it and how much i wish that you continue. you are awful good at this and hope that you keep on with it. thanks!