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Our first Christmas…Chapter 6
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She looks down before she says “your mom.”
“Exactly.”
“You know, Tina’s not your mom. She’s not going to leave you.”
“I know, but this time of year I go nuts, as you are witnessing. And it’s our first Christmas together as a couple and I just wanted to spend the day with someone I love.”
“Hello, I’m sitting right here!”
I laugh at the expression of mock horror on her face and throw a pillow at her.
“I know you are, and I love you for it, more than you will ever know. But I still would’ve liked Tina here.”
“Me too. Taking care of you is tiring. I could’ve used a little help.”
“Ass.”
I shake my head as I gather up our glasses and head into the kitchen. I come back with two fresh glasses of rum and eggnog for us.
“Are you trying to get me drunk and take advantage of me Porter?”
“Trust me Al; it wasn’t that good the first time around.”
“Now who’s the ass?” She says as she throws the pillow back my way. I laugh and duck out of the way.
“So what are you going to do about your crazy nerves?” Again with the tact.
“Well, I guess I’ll just have to keep telling Tina how I feel, that seems to help.”
“Amazing how a relationship works like that, isn’t it?”
“And I was going to say keep on talking to you, but I think I just changed my mind.”
“Whatever, you’d be lost without me; doomed to wander WeHo alone.”
“Actually, I was hoping to put an end to that when Tina gets home.”
She looks at me with confusion and interest, the true expression of a reporter. “What do you mean?”
“Well, and if you let this slip I will personally sew your mouth shut, I’m going to ask Tina to marry me.”
I barely have the sentence our before she leaps across the couch and crushes me into a bear hug. She’s talking a mile a minute, already planning for our wedding.
“That so fucking rocks! You guys are totally meant to be together. Can you imagine; The mighty Bette Porter, Lesbian Sex Goddess, a married woman. You are gonna break a lot of hearts my friend. Melvin’s going to have a heart attack. You should wear an all white suit and those new Jimmy Choo’s you bought last month. They’ll be perfect. I guess that means Tina’s going to wear the dress. That seems fitting I suppose. What am I going to wear?”
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and i love you…this is so great, i knew tina will come home as soon as you mentioned hopeless romantic…so am i, and this chapter was indeed absolutely romantic and perfect…i demand sequel
Yeah, what the hell, go for it.
Al is so adorable. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think all TiBetters are hopelessly romantic. LOL
AND THAT WAS EXACTLY HOW I WANTED THIS STORY TO GO!!have to admit i had a feeling that you would take the very romantic route and that Tina would either not get on that plane or turn up on the day and you have done the story justice gotta love ya for it,infact im off to read it again its not just the NC17s i love i love the sappy stuff just as much!!!lol lookin forward to more just coz the hols are over doesnt mean this has to end yet!!!lol
“Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” Aww you’ve got the witty Alice and romantic B&T it’s a winning combo.
heehee… that was great!!! :)
wow, your as much of a hopeless romantic as me.. u have NO IDEA how big the smile on my face was with the key in the door line … amazing!! love this! please continue the story
Good chapter. What a wonderful Tina surprise Bette and now let see some loving coming. Alice is so funny. Post soon please, thanks!
knew you wouldn’t let us down. YES. Happy New Year to all , and as the others said, keep it coming, engagement, wedding, etc.
brill chapter! a perfect mix of funny and sweet.
hopelessly romantic.. LOL. i am one of them. this story is great..!
“It’s a Christmas Miracle!” Great line Alice – and a Happy New Year to everyone!
Yeah I agree with Amanda. No need to end this at all. After all, there’s still an engagement, wedding, honeymoon, etc. to cover. ;)
yes i love alice… and it was a christmas miracle… beautiful… and that is where tina belongs… forever… love this s tory… and just because christmas is over… no need to end this beautiful story… just make it a sequel… and bring on the loving… HAPPY NEW YEAR…
Very sweet.
I couldn’t agree more with AmandaMG and Lamentamini….do a sequel…..we want to read about how their relationship grows and you’ve to be there to cover B’s proposal and B&T’s wedding, honeymoon, kids an so on :o)) LOL…..By the way I loved the line “Taking care of you is tiring. I could’ve used a little help”….your Alice is so great :o)) Please keep’em coming
I love this, the best Christmas gift…Each other…
please keep on writing – I love your story!
You have got to love Alice…she may lack tact, but she’s got a lot of heart. That was a very lovely and romantic chapter. Thanks for the update. Please post soon.
Can’t wait for more!!!
Awesome. Looking forward to more.
My favorite line: “Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” That was priceless! Thanks for making me laugh!
Happy New Year one and all another fantastic chapter
Great update love the story now on with the NC-17.. lol.
You can take us to Easter, that was so beautiful thankks
hi there- i just came across your writing yesterday and went back and read all that you’ve posted. just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed it and how much i wish that you continue. you are awful good at this and hope that you keep on with it. thanks!