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Over me
I didn’t understand where all these feelings were emerging from. I’d left Alice for a reason and now I was in love with Lara. That was that. Alice and I had barely spoken since our split months ago. Her behaviour had become increasingly unhinged, which Shane thought was to do with the cocktail of pills her doctor had prescribed her, but which privately I thought was just Alice and it added to my relief in being away from her. She was actively hostile towards us if we happened to be in the same place and took every opportunity to put me down or make some snide comment or other. I thought it was sad, but it also made me start to hate her. I assumed the feeling was mutual. Now I feared seeing her because my feelings were becoming so out of control I didn’t trust my own response. Perhaps I was losing it too? Why on earth would I want Alice to be making love to me when I had the normalcy of Lara and the safe, familiarity of our relationship? With Alice it had just been too much. It had scared me; the strength of the passion, and her obsession with me. She threatened to consume me, I felt I could get lost in her and never be found again. My career had suffered. All I needed was her. Maybe it was our history, the fact she was my best friend first, whatever it all added up to more intensity than I could handle. Her jealousy was endless and her possessiveness monsterous. I only wish I knew how to alter how I felt.
Then inevitably we met. It was a celebration. Jenny was back in town with her new girlfriend in tow. I had tried to cry off but Shane, assuming correctly it was because of Alice, had persuaded me things had moved on. Then she had let that Alice had met someone, she was bringing him to the dinner. Him. I hadn’t been expecting that. What you thought she would never get over you, Fairbanks? Nothing could keep me away then. Maybe this would help, to see her with someone else. Closure, painful as it might be. Plus I could tell Lara was pleased about it, the storm cloud of Alice might finally be moving from over us.
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(31 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Wow I’m already super impressed, a very great start indeed, I like danish stories that don’t always start with them being in love so keep up the good work cause your doing awesome so far :D
That’s a really good start! I loved every single part of it! I hope everything works out between these two former lovers/foes…PPS!!!
Wow, awesome start!! Loving this perspective. Please continue and post again soon xx
where did you come from out of nowhere? wow – excellent start. i can’t wait to see where you take it.
Welcome to the board! What an awesome start. This is a powerful piece of work. I totally loved it. Please continue soon. :)
Yayyy!! Another danish story! please continue
beautiful
Wow! It was funny when Dana thought Ethan was a geek. Please don’t make it too easy for Dana.
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Oooh, this is such a great start! It’s got to be difficult exploring things exlusively from Dana’s point of view, but it’s definitely refreshing. I love this and can’t wait to see where you take it.
Hey. This was a cool start. Keep it up! I’d love to see where it goes.
Great start, please continue. All Danish stories are welcomed with open arms!
‘I love you’ Might be a good start Dane! Lovely start! Pls do continue!
WOW,that was one hell of a to start a awesome Danish story! I hope you continue soon, thanks you again! PPS
great story. i like your twist on it and look forward to reading more.