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Over me
Unconsciously I knew I was dressing for her. My clothes were tighter than I would normally wear, my hair down, make-up carefully applied and my heels of the fuck-me variety. Lara noticed and said I didn’t have to try to seduce her anymore. I turned the wattage up on my smile: I know that, baby. A long kiss before we left and then the short drive to an expensive, hot new restaurant. My extended beautifying had cost us; we were the last to arrive. I tried to look everywhere but at her and failed. She looked amazing. Her skin was glowing and her top hugged all the right places. Her hand was entwined with his. Apparently his name was Ethan. He was the scraggly bearded, longer haired type, with trendy glasses, even featured handsomeness and a carefully studied air of cool. I hated him on sight of course. She turned from her conversation when we entered and we nodded at each other. She looked at me only briefly before carrying on and I felt my stomach churn with disappointment. After that my first drink soon became my second and then my third and fourth. I felt light-headed and sick. Alcohol had never suited me. Shane was sitting to my left and kept trying to chat to me. I only remember her telling me what she thought I wanted to hear. How Alice was really back to old self, how happy she seemed with Ethan, that we should try to be friends again and then the killer blow. I’m sure she really misses you, Dane. How could I tell Shane that what I wanted, really wanted at that very moment was for Alice to crawl across the table, all creamy skinned and glossy lipped and kiss me until I saw stars.
By the time we got to dessert I was feeling as if I was about to revisit my starter and main course and the kisses that Ethan kept stealing from Alice were only making me feel more nauseous. He was currently rubbing her back and occasionally glancing at her with puppy dog eyes. What a geek. Anger and desire was beginning to merge within me and I decided I needed a time out in the restroom. Lara was not unaware of my drunken state and broke off a conversation with Helena to offer to accompany me. I quite bluntly refused, ignoring the hurt in her eyes and walked unsteadily across the restaurant. I was leaning over a sink, trying to stop the room spinning when suddenly the door swung open and Alice sauntered in. I wondered then if she had been watching me after all.
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(31 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Wow I’m already super impressed, a very great start indeed, I like danish stories that don’t always start with them being in love so keep up the good work cause your doing awesome so far :D
That’s a really good start! I loved every single part of it! I hope everything works out between these two former lovers/foes…PPS!!!
Wow, awesome start!! Loving this perspective. Please continue and post again soon xx
where did you come from out of nowhere? wow – excellent start. i can’t wait to see where you take it.
Welcome to the board! What an awesome start. This is a powerful piece of work. I totally loved it. Please continue soon. :)
Yayyy!! Another danish story! please continue
beautiful
Wow! It was funny when Dana thought Ethan was a geek. Please don’t make it too easy for Dana.
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Glad I ran across your story, this is really starting out nicely. I love the whole Lara-Dana-Alice relationship dynamic issue thing, and I enjoy reading stories involving the three of them, no matter who ends up with whom. I like here how you’re showing Dana’s underlying attraction to Alice–looks like drama ahead! Please keep it up and post soon and keep it coming! Cheers…
Oooh, this is such a great start! It’s got to be difficult exploring things exlusively from Dana’s point of view, but it’s definitely refreshing. I love this and can’t wait to see where you take it.
Hey. This was a cool start. Keep it up! I’d love to see where it goes.
Great start, please continue. All Danish stories are welcomed with open arms!
‘I love you’ Might be a good start Dane! Lovely start! Pls do continue!
WOW,that was one hell of a to start a awesome Danish story! I hope you continue soon, thanks you again! PPS
great story. i like your twist on it and look forward to reading more.