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Phobia (Chapter 4)
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I nodded and stood against the wall by the door with nearly everybody watching the display I had just caused as Al hurried off. A few moments later, she had returned to my side helping me stumble outside. “Where’d you go?”
“Dana’s going to follow us down to your house so I can just leave your car with you and then use my Mini to get back.” After she mentioned Dana’s name again, I had to ask.
“Since when did you two start hanging out again?”
Rather than answer right away, she waited until we were driving to admit. “I honestly don’t know what I’m doing anymore; I make compulsive decisions without thinking about possible consequences they could have.”
It seemed like she was applying that statement to everything and not only about Dana. “That’s sounds exactly like what Shane’s doing.”
“Yes, it does.” Surprisingly, she agreed with me but I knew there was more to her sentence. “And that’s also what you’re doing.” There it was.
The rest of the ride was silent except for a few times Al lost her patience and spewed profanity at the vehicle in front of us for not moving when the light was green, so by the time we finally pulled up in front of my home, I was spent and wasted.
If it hadn’t been for her and Dana, I never would’ve made it to the front door where they relinquished command and left me with my family. But before they turned to go, I made another request. “Al?” She paused in the doorway. “Take care of Shane.”
With a nod and hopeful smile, she shut the door.
I didn’t know what the outcome of this entire situation would be, but I did know one thing for sure even though it was a major cliché- no one would ever be the same after this was all over.
Dana-
“Well, this looks like your stop.” Alice drawled as she parked in front of my condo but kept her focus on the steering wheel. Obviously, tonight was taking it’s toll on us all and the fact that it was two o’ clock in the morning wasn’t helping.
I was about to give up on figuring out what to say to cheer her up but as I reached for the door handle, I remembered something. “I’ve just gotta ask,” She looked at me expectantly. “What were you going to tell me before Jenny called?” The way she was remaining silent and avoiding my gaze told me she was stalling for time.
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ok you have no idea how much i appreciate you chaning things for me..wow amazing and your update was great… like i said its agreat story and im not saying i dont want drama but i do want them to make up and get over it and be together again cuz its all we have with the new season coming out. but you are an amazing writer and everything you wirte is great so i have total confidence in you . the whole shane going over and saying she will wait for her and she loves her perfect thank you…
Hey now, you can borrow anything from me! with updates as great as this I’m at your feet- so do with me what you’d like! lol so I guess I’ll start from the END then work my way back up to the beginning because the end is just 2 important to leave alone- so… TICKET? WHAT TICKET WHERE IS SHE GOINGGGG? lol ok there I did it now you MUST answer it pretty plz : puppy eyes : i loved al’s line “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.” so funny! The sharmen moment was sweet even though it was mostly S just shane and her taking a first step and with Carmen having heard her I’m sure she’ll come around or at least try the whole friend thing which… almost only last’s for a few laughs before they jump each others bones lol SO don’t hurt me but I STILL don’t know what Alice was going to say even though I’m leaning toward i love you, or I really miss you- or it’s the obvious “I’m leaving peace out sucka” lol so come on babe throw me a bone here lol well, I’m still in the midst of creating a new word that is worthy enough of describing how great you are :) and.. I guess I better get moving on posting a new chapter! because I deff want you to post another one asap :) x0x0x
what can i say… brilliant!!.. completely brilliant!!.. love how shane is trying to fix her mistake.. and carmen watching from her window.. where do you come up with this stuff??.. and Alice moving?!?! ok, now i definatly need more..like now please.. i mean seriously im begging you here..:P oh and by the way liked the last line in carmens point of view.. it true.. nothings going to be the same.. but then again sometimes its even better..
excellent!!!! great update… i love how shane’s doing something about her mistakes!! keep it up please… that was really sweet of shane going o carmen’s plac
Aww aren’t you the sweetie leaving me a cute little message like that, this could be the beginning of a great thing 2geeky! *wink wink nudge nudge* Now am I about to get beaten up by your g/f? Heehee, anyways, LOVING this! 1. Alice leaving…explain…now! 2. what was Alice going to say to Dana? ‘Leave that ho and come be with me coz we’re destined’- I’m close right? 3. Aww Shane’s all grown up and acting like an adult, go her. 4. cough*getdanishtogether*cough :P Man I should not be leaving feedback since I have to go to work in 2hours and I havent been to bed yet, yikes! By the way thank you so much for your comments, they make my night too! See I told you this is the beginning… we could be the next danish…just think about it :P Peace out xx