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Phobia (Chapter 4)
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“I was just going to say that I-” She paused again and I was determined not to rush her, yet I was dying to know what it was. “Nothing. I wasn’t going to say anything.”
Saying that I was severely disappointed would’ve been an understatement. “Please, I really want to know-”
“No, you don’t.” She interjected quickly and almost coldly, so much in fact that it made me flinch. And then she shifted back into apologetic mode. “Look, I’m sorry; I really am, but I’m tired and annoyed over tonight and I can’t even remember what I was going to say. So, could we just forget tonight ever happened?”
I did want to forget tonight had indeed happened yet at the same time I didn’t want to forget. Yes, I wanted to erase all of tonight’s drama, however I didn’t want to forget that Alice had actually called and confided in me when something went wrong. And I never wanted to forget the way I felt when she was around me. But nothing lasts forever, right?
“Sure, I can do that.” My voice was oddly shaky and I cleared my throat before climbing out of the car mumbling ‘good night’ as I shut the door and walked towards my apartment.
I hadn’t made it further than two steps up the walkway before she rolled down her window and called out to me. “Hey, Dane?” I turned back. “Thanks.”
“For what?”
“For being there for me.”
That phrase alone had made my night seem a little brighter and the only response I could manage was a goofy grin. She smiled and almost laughed at my behavior as she put up the window and waved goodbye before driving off into the cold night.
But after she left, it didn’t take long for my smile to fade and I realized that I might not see her again for awhile since, let’s face it, she had essentially called me out of a minute of pure distress.
I temporarily got over it though and quietly let myself inside of the apartment being careful not to wake Lara up, knowing fully well that she’d be in bed by now. However, I sauntered through the house anyways, peeking inside each room to make sure she wasn’t up. And upon reaching the bedroom door, I hesitated before edging it open and breathing a sigh of relief when I saw her sleeping silhouette on the bed.
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ok you have no idea how much i appreciate you chaning things for me..wow amazing and your update was great… like i said its agreat story and im not saying i dont want drama but i do want them to make up and get over it and be together again cuz its all we have with the new season coming out. but you are an amazing writer and everything you wirte is great so i have total confidence in you . the whole shane going over and saying she will wait for her and she loves her perfect thank you…
Hey now, you can borrow anything from me! with updates as great as this I’m at your feet- so do with me what you’d like! lol so I guess I’ll start from the END then work my way back up to the beginning because the end is just 2 important to leave alone- so… TICKET? WHAT TICKET WHERE IS SHE GOINGGGG? lol ok there I did it now you MUST answer it pretty plz : puppy eyes : i loved al’s line “Hey, I don’t procrastinate; I just reschedule.” so funny! The sharmen moment was sweet even though it was mostly S just shane and her taking a first step and with Carmen having heard her I’m sure she’ll come around or at least try the whole friend thing which… almost only last’s for a few laughs before they jump each others bones lol SO don’t hurt me but I STILL don’t know what Alice was going to say even though I’m leaning toward i love you, or I really miss you- or it’s the obvious “I’m leaving peace out sucka” lol so come on babe throw me a bone here lol well, I’m still in the midst of creating a new word that is worthy enough of describing how great you are :) and.. I guess I better get moving on posting a new chapter! because I deff want you to post another one asap :) x0x0x
what can i say… brilliant!!.. completely brilliant!!.. love how shane is trying to fix her mistake.. and carmen watching from her window.. where do you come up with this stuff??.. and Alice moving?!?! ok, now i definatly need more..like now please.. i mean seriously im begging you here..:P oh and by the way liked the last line in carmens point of view.. it true.. nothings going to be the same.. but then again sometimes its even better..
excellent!!!! great update… i love how shane’s doing something about her mistakes!! keep it up please… that was really sweet of shane going o carmen’s plac
Aww aren’t you the sweetie leaving me a cute little message like that, this could be the beginning of a great thing 2geeky! *wink wink nudge nudge* Now am I about to get beaten up by your g/f? Heehee, anyways, LOVING this! 1. Alice leaving…explain…now! 2. what was Alice going to say to Dana? ‘Leave that ho and come be with me coz we’re destined’- I’m close right? 3. Aww Shane’s all grown up and acting like an adult, go her. 4. cough*getdanishtogether*cough :P Man I should not be leaving feedback since I have to go to work in 2hours and I havent been to bed yet, yikes! By the way thank you so much for your comments, they make my night too! See I told you this is the beginning… we could be the next danish…just think about it :P Peace out xx