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Phobia (Chapter 5)
I ran a hand through my hair in self-disappointment and opened to door to get out. The door was nearly closed when I heard her voice again. “Shane?”
In an instant I reopened the door. “Yeah?”
“I’m glad you’re finally taking responsibility for your actions,” Maybe I did have some hope after all. “But you shouldn’t do it for me. You need to do it for yourself.” Okay, maybe not. I managed to nod my head, but a part of me felt rejected. As though I hadn’t gotten anywhere in my plan to get Carmen’s trust back. And it’s not like I couldn’t blame her either. “I’ll see you tomorrow night.”
Again my only response was a nod of agreement since I was finding it hard to talk again.
I watched Carmen drive away and as soon as her vehicle was out of sight, I turned on my heels to face the building.
If I didn’t already have a reason to be mad at Alice, I certainly did now.
Alice-
When I arrived at my apartment after running a few errands, I let myself in with the key and it was then that I noticed Shane sprawled across the couch, mindlessly flipping through tv channels. She didn’t look too happy when she saw me. “Where’d you go?”
“I had to stop at work and take care of a few things.” She turned off the television and slowly sat up, still staring at the blank screen. Something was off; I sensed it as soon as I walked into the room.
However, I ignored it and walked by her on my way to the kitchen but I had barely taken two steps past the couch when she stated, “I talked to Helena this morning.” Her tone left no room for questioning whether or not she knew of my plans.
But I had to make sure. “About what?”
“About you.” Yeah, she knew. “Jesus Christ, Alice. Why didn’t you tell me?” It sounded like she was more disappointed than angry with me. But it still hurt.
My back was turned to her, probably because if I saw her face it would only serve to crush me even more. “Because,” It was simple; I didn’t have an excuse. “Because I knew you’d try to talk me out of it.”
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Woah…that was incredible, is it just me or are all you guys getting better and better with each post? I have 10 million questions I want to know the answer to but I know I’ll find out in good time, is it wrong I’m so happy Lara and Dana aren’t together anymore? And what a perfect line Lara left with, bravo, damn I’m rejected again, what does my breath smell or something? :P xx
awesome story… i like how its not just concentrating on one pairing bt a few. and alice better not leave… it seems like its going to get worse before it gets better. but awesome story! Love it! Please post more soon.
Lara’s “congratu-fuckyou-lations” 2 funny but ouch Lara saying let me know how it feels knowing some1 left u 2 dana that even hurt me! lol i loved how shane and carmen are at a good stance, no yelling no fighting :) oh yay it’s dana right? so yeah i read this like 3 times b4 i posted a comment lol don’t hurt me! but yeah i really loved this chap, and i hope that Alice and Dana will finally talk, tho i wonder if Dana will tell Alice about Lara or not… plz don’t keep me in suspense for 2 long im begging! x0x
I think it’s Dana too. I actually wouldn’t be upset if Alice went away for a little while. Whether Dana and Lara are together or not she seems to need a little distance. Alice needs to get herself together or she will be useless in a real relationship.
Yeah ackemat I agree that Alice needs to get herself together before she gets into another relationship. Top writing thx PPS
why would i think you should be shot, its a start for my sharmen and after the season 4 episode omg i need sharmen to work it out but i have faith in you completely and great job again
ok ok im teling you what i feel lol…. man im glad carmen and shane are talking again… and i hope thats dana on the phone!!! againg you are a fucking bad person haha how can you leave it at that moment!! but anyways… i think christmas is going to be good for them… like really good… you know im loveing this story so keep it coming!!!!!!!!