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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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It might’ve seemed even more obvious if I went to see her immediately after having arrived which is why I stalled for time. “So, I can see that you only invited close friends this year.” I remarked after leaning backwards and glancing into the next room where Max and Jenny were conversing with Tina and Henry.
“Yeah, I thought it would be a nice break from all the fancy gatherings with people I hardly knew.” Helena was distracting herself by sorting through the wines.
But I knew the real reason why there was merely a handful of people her tonight. It was because she didn’t have as much money as she used to. I would’ve teased her about it if I didn’t feel so bad for her.
“Hey, Helena?” Tina’s voice rang loud and clear from the next room. “Could you come here for a second?”
Helena grimaced. “Bloody hell, if she asks me one more question that pertains to our new boss at work, I’m going to scream.”
“Well, I’m going to step outside just in case.” After she walked past me, I took it as my chance to find Shane. I quietly sneaked out the back door, clicking it shut and instantly feeling the bitter cold breeze brush over my bare arms. Quickly, I threw back on my jacket to ward off the chill and surveyed the surroundings.
“Carmen?” Shane was standing a few inches away from the ledge of the pool, the blue haze from the water reflecting across her face. Honestly, why Helena felt the need to keep her pool heated during winter was beyond me. “Carmen?” She repeated a decibel louder.
I snapped out of my daze and met her eyes. “Yeah, it’s me. Duh, who else would it be?” My feeble attempt at a joke was lost on her ears as she went back to staring at the floor of the pool, raising a lit cigarette to her lips with shaky hands.
“What are you doing out here?” She wasn’t being cold or distant, but she wasn’t looking at me either.
A shiver ran down my spine and I don’t think it was purely from the freezing weather. It was Christmas Eve yet that didn’t keep the drama at bay because there was no denying Shane was worried over something. “I was wondering what you were doing out here.” I countered.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(