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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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Her eyes became serious. “Then what do I have to do to prove you can trust me again?”
I didn’t have any type of response to that one and I don’t think she was expecting one either. It took less than a minute for my desire to outweigh my rational thoughts when she leaned forward to close the distance between our lips as my closed and my mouth parted, ready for the inevitable to happen. And then it happened.
“Hey, guys!”
Alice had finally arrived.
Alice-
I watched Carmen flinch when I called out to them and try to put safe distance between her and Shane although the damage had already had been done. It was too late to when I realized what was happening, otherwise I never would’ve said anything. But the words out of my mouth and I couldn’t take them back. Since there was no way to make the situation worse, I walked towards them and teased. “Oh my,” I switched glances between Carmen and Shane. “Did I almost interrupt something?”
Carmen looked away, failing to hide her blush while Shane stood rooted to the spot and slowly peeled her eyes open to glare at me. “You didn’t almost anything.” Yeah, she was pissed.
“Well, my apologies for that but , Shane, I really need to talk to you.” I pleaded.
She appeared exhausted. “Why does everyone always come to me for advice?”
“Because,” Carmen interjected. “You’re Yoda.”
Now it was Carmen’s turn to be on the receiving end of Shane’s frustration. “Carmen, you’re not helping me.”
The whiny voice in which she said it emitted a chuckle from Carmen, but it wasn’t getting any warmer outside and I grew impatient. “Please, come back inside already. It’ll only take a minute.”
“Fine.” Shane finally gave up as she trailed back to the door. “Carmen, aren’t you coming?”
I spun around to see that Carmen still hadn’t moved. “I’ll be in soon. I need to collect my thoughts first.”
Shane was confused but didn’t ask questions. Instead she followed me inside and wasted no time. “This had better be good, Al.”
“Well, I know you’re probably dying to go back outside and shove your tongue down Carmen’s throat, but I need you to listen to me.” Not the best thing to say since her glare had doubled in intensity. I carried on regardless. “Anyway, do you remember Uta?”
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(