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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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“I’m just thinking.” The smoke poured from her nostrils and she shut her eyes tightly as if to try and chase away a bad mental image.
Soon, I found myself standing less than two feet away from her. “About what?” She was momentarily startled by my close proximity. “Or am I not allowed to ask what’s bothering you?”
“It’s not what is bothering me, it’s who.”
My mind stumbled for guesses. “Is it Alice?”
“No.”
“Dana?”
“Nope.”
“Max and Jenny?”
“Definitely not.”
I swallowed hard before asking the next. “Is it me?”
“Fuck no.” She looked over at me in confused shock, maybe even a trace of hurt. “How can you think that?”
“I don’t know; it was only a guess.” Her expression remained the same as she returned her sight to the water and took yet another drag from her half-smoked cigarette. Talking was getting me nowhere, besides it wasn’t my place to be asking, so I changed tactics again. “Shane, I have no clue as to what’s going on with you, but it’s Christmas Eve. Can’t you at least put aside your problems for one night and enjoy life with your friends?” Even I knew that was easier said than done, yet I hated seeing her like this. Because while I might’ve had plenty of reasons to be mad at her, I wasn’t unaffected when it came to her well-being .
After a moments thought, she ran her free hand through her hair and shifted to directly face me, a small smile tugging at the corner of her mouth. “I’m sorry; You’re right, I shouldn’t be like this. But can I ask you something?” I was painfully aware that her face was so unintentionally close to mine that I could feel her warm breath on my lips when she spoke. The most I could do was nod. “Why are you being so nice to me? I thought you hated me.”
“I don’t hate you Shane.” came my whispered reply.
“But you haven’t forgiven me yet, have you?” She’d finally asked the question I feared. It scared me because I couldn’t give an honest answer and times like these only confused me more.
“I can’t.” She let out a pained sigh as she carelessly flicked her cigarette into the pool, something that probably wouldn’t make Helena’s night any better. But I didn’t voice my opinion to Shane; I couldn’t when she still hadn’t moved away from me.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(