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“Oh fuck! Right there!”
Alice pushed in harder as she felt Dana’s walls start to contract around her fingers. She kissed Dana’s neck and bent down to whisper in her ear.
“I want you to come hard for me.”
Dana just moaned and bit her lip; she started to shake as her orgasm built up in the pit of her stomach. She looked into Alice’s eyes and was sure that she saw a small sparkle; she lent forward and quickly captured Alice’s lips with hers. Alice was just about to pull away, when she felt the explosion of Dana’s orgasm as she moaned and whimpered against Alice’s lips.
Alice kissed Dana for a few moments more but slowly pulled away as she withdrew her fingers. She looked down at Dana and smiled at her.
“You okay?”
“Yeah, you’re fantastic.”
Alice just smiled and shrugged. Dana stretched up to kiss Alice again, but this time the blonde moved away.
“I’m not going to bite. I thought maybe we could get to know each other.”
Alice gave a sad smile then kissed Dana on the nose.
“You’re cute and sweet, but believe me when I say you don’t want to get messed up with me.”
“Maybe I do.”
“You don’t.”
Alice started to get off the bed but Dana grabbed her arm.
“Please, stay with me.”
“Why? You’re sexy and famous you can have anybody you want.”
“I want you.”
“You had me.”
Dana grinned at this.
“Not yet.”
She pulled Alice back onto the bed and flipped her onto her back, straddling her hips Dana sat up and looked at Alice.
“What are you doing?”
“I told you before. I want you.”
Dana lent down and started to slowly kiss at Alice’s jaw line, she kissed up to the corner of Alice’s mouth and stopped, she wasn’t going to push the blonde.
She then shifted downwards so she could lick at Alice’s collar bone gently running her tongue over the hollow at her throat. Alice was confused she had never had anybody this caring and attentive before, she decided to throw caution to the wind and pulled Dana’s face up to hers, looking into Dana’s eyes she saw no cruelty and with that she placed her lips against the brunette’s bring them into an earth shattering kiss. Dana opened her mouth and moaned with pleasure which was doubled when she felt Alice’s tongue against hers as they fought for dominance.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.