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“What’s wrong?”
“Nothing, you’re perfect. Where’s your bedroom?”
Dana took Alice by the hand and led her through the house to a large bedroom with a huge bed. Alice gently pushed the gorgeous brunette to the bed; she then stepped away and slowly took off her own clothes leaving on a very sexy pair of black lacy underwear. Dana gulped at the sight before her and willing let the blonde straddle her as she lay down. Alice was lent over the eager brunette with her legs straddling Dana’s hips and her arms at her shoulders. Dana arched up to try and get another taste of Alice’s sweet lips, but was denied as she moved to her neck and sucked on Dana’s pulse point. Dana moaned at the touch and reached her hands around Alice’s back; she undid the blonde’s bra and threw it to the floor. Alice slowly kissed down Dana’s body allowing her own nipples to graze against Dana’s smooth skin; she finally reached her destination and stopped so she could inhale Dana’s sweet scent.
Dana held her breath in anticipation and gasped as Alice’s tongue made on strong lick from her centre to her aching clit.
“Oh god.”
“You like that?”
“Yes. Oh yes.”
“Is there anything you want?”
“You. Just you.”
Alice took another long lick savouring the taste of Dana’s wetness. She then circled her tongue around Dana’s centre and plunged straight into her core. Dana moaned and ran her hands through Alice’s hair, grabbing and pulling the blonde closer. Alice worked her tongue in and out of Dana swirling and searching, she then withdrew her tongue silencing Dana’s whimper with another gasp as she placed her lips around the brunette’s aching clit and sucked hard.
“Oh Christ.”
Alice carried on sucking Dana’s clit whilst she ran her fingers up and down; suddenly she pushed three fingers into Dana hard.
“Alice! Fuck me! Please.”
Alice thrust into Dana hard building up a rhythm that Dana matched as she pushed down onto Alice’s fingers. The blonde ran the tip of her tongue over Dana’s clit then worked her way up her body so she could take Dana’s nipple in her mouth. She had three fingers inside Dana and started to curl her fingers with each thrust so she could rub against Dana’s g-spot as she used her thumb to massage her clit. Dana’s juices by this time were flowing freely down Alice’s hand and her moans were becoming louder and louder.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.