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Powerful Feelings Part 4
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Shane heard a car pull up outside and a horn beep. Shane got up to the window and looked down. It was Bette. Shane’s eyes widened and her heart quickened. Bette was looking up to Shane’s window. Shane signalled down that she would be 5 minutes.
Shane ripped of her clothes and flew into the shower, luckily the water was still warm, she had the quickest shower, washed her hair and was out with in a couple of minutes. Shane pulled on a pair of jeans and a clean T-shirt from the drawer, scraped some products through her hair a squirt of perfume brushed her teeth and was out in the corridor locking the door within the 5 minutes.
Inside Shane was trembling as she sauntered over to Bette’s car. Bette was looking straight ahead.
Shane opened the passenger door and slid onto the leather seat.
The car smelt of Bette.
Neither said a word. Bette started the engine and started to drive.
The sexual tension in the enclosed space was electric. Shane rested her head back and closed her eyes breathing in the electricity. Bette too, was aware of this and of Shane’s actions.
Shane gently and slowly reached over for Bette’s hand which was resting on the gear stick. Electricity shot through their bodies, Bette let out a small gasp, the gasp in turn made Shane breath deeper and harder, anticipating their bodies together. As the journey carried on, Shane continued to play with Bette’s hand, sometimes gentle caresses sometimes simulating sex with Bette’s long slender fingers.
Bette eventually pulled over high up on one of the roads leading out to the hills the resting point of the car had a beautiful view over the city.
Still with no exchange of words. Bette unfastened her seat belt and then Shane’s and slowly raised her leg over so that she was straddling Shane in the passenger seat. Bette locked eyes with Shane’s. Bette’s big dark eyes and Shane’s green eyes stared into each other as they connected.
Bette started to slowly push her body onto Shane’s and let her lips part as she moved into kiss Shane. Shane was helpless, Bette was in total control and Shane felt as if she was floating on clouds. Bette gradually became more urgent with her kissing and rhythmically moved her hips into Shane’s. The kissing became frenzied as both women knew exactly what they needed. All the hundreds of women Shane had kissed no one had ever felt like this. Shane was in love and she was never going to get over this one.
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Wow, it’s been so long. Glad you decided to continue. Thia Bette-Shane pairing somehow reminds me of Brian and Justin in QAF. The difference is Brian is a dude, while Bette has(had?) Tina. It’s quite difficult to choose who would get hurt between Tina and Shane. But I feel like Bette and Tina would last longer than Bette and Shane.
smoking hottht was sizzlingyou really did a great job
I’m glad you posted!!! I really love this story… please don’t let us wait too long before another chapter ok?!Great job!!!
Wow…this is sooo wrong but sooo hot. Bette can’t have both. Does she REALLY love Tina? She sure not acting like it…maybe she needs to be single until she can “keep it in her pants.” I like this story though…
not a good storyline – kinda of silly cant imagine where this is going
I have always thought that Shane and Bette would be hot together for a short term thing, because they do care so much for each other, and this started out good, but this is wrong. Bette would never treat Shane like this, like a prostitute.
You do capture their raw passion and the sex is hot and animalistic. Maybe sex w/Tina is too wifely and Bette needs cold, hard f*cking. It is a fantasy.
This story is awesome! Theres not many bette and shane stories out there so i was surprised to find this. I hope you post again. Theres still the first date between them and tina finding out! Please post soon! :)
My, my, my! Well worth the wait! Please continue quickly; this is so intriguing! Thanks for the post.
it’s been a long time coming but it worth it. I am happy to see Bette and Shane together…for me with Tina…it’s over. With Shane it can be quite interesting to see how the relation will go. For now it’s very hard but perhaps they will find a way to go together. I will like that very much. This story is a good change. Thanks and update soon please.
Incredibly hot chapter!! Nice job.Bette has some major issues to work out. She has all these feelings for other women, but still wants Tina back. She’ll never be able to do it, this has got to get out of her system before she goes back to Tina. IF Tina will have her, I’m sure Alice has spilled the beans.
that was hot! i love bette and shane together. the stud and the alpha. plese don’t wait too long to post. I can’t wait to see what Tina does when she finds out.
So happy to see you resurface with an awesome update. I hope you won’t make us wait so long for the next one. Welcome back!
YES! I just found your story, but this is exactly what I’ve been looking for, for a whileeee… Um, please keep it Shane/Bette? Oh, and make Bette slap herself for hurting Shane. Great update
Well this is a new spin, but it’s interesting and I like it. I always felt like Bette and Shane had a special connection b/c they were so alike in so many ways. They are both HOT, independent, strong willed and neither is big on opening up about their feelings (yet they can open up to one another). Bette really has herself in a bind now. Shane has fallen for her and wants to be w/ her, but Bette still has some feelings for Tina (though she isn’t sure what they are). I think Bette just doesn’t want to be committed right now-she probably wants the free dom to sleep w/ Tina, Shane and anyone else that crosses her path w/ out having to be apologetic about it. I’ll keep an eye out for the next chapter.