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Powerful Feelings Part 4
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The phone went dead.
‘T………..’
Bette felt sick
Tina’s mind was in overdrive.
‘Maybe Bette didn’t mean that – maybe I had just jumped to conclusions – I know Bette though and something wasn’t right – she needed to tell me something.‘ Tina thought searching her thoughts. She carried on. ‘Bette the alpha female of the group – along with Shane who was the most decent and honest of the group this made up the whole structure. If Bette really has had enough of me then will the group exclude me – what will happen?’
Tina thought of Shane. Tina loved Alice but Shane always had a calm perspective over things and she might be able to shed some light on Bettes mind set.
Tina reached for the phone to call one of her dearest friends.
Shane had pulled over in her truck when she saw Tina name flash up on her phone.
Shane nearly rejected the call but she owed it to Tina to take what ever was coming. ‘Shit,’ Shane thought, She didn’t think Alice would have really told Tina already.
‘Hi’, Shane mumbled.
‘Hey Shane,’ Tina sighed, ‘What’s happening?’
Shane’s mouth had gone dry and she was swallowing air, ‘Nothing.’
‘Shane, is everything ok?’
‘Yeah fine.’
‘Oh ok. Are you sure?’
‘Yep’
‘Look, Shane, obviously you’ve heard what’s happened with me and Bette, I could really use a friend right now to talk to.’
Silence. Shane felt sick.
Tina was getting slightly irritated
‘Shane!!!!’
‘Yeah.’
‘So how about it wanna meet at the Planet for a coffee and a chat?’
‘Erm, well, I’ve got back to back appointments tomorrow.’
‘What about the day after?’
‘Erm, well……….’
‘Don’t tell me, you’re fully booked. Look Shane I know its difficult, me and Bette, but I really need your cool outlook, I need some help Shane.’
Yeah, yeah I know, I’ll try for tomorrow then, I can get out for about 2, any good?’
‘Shane, that’ll be great, it means a lot to me you know, you mean a lot to me.’
‘See ya tomorrow then.’ As Shane hung up she slumped over the steering wheel. ‘Fuck.’
It was nearly 9pm and Shane lay on her bed – staring at the ceiling – hers was one of three single beds in a shared room – she hated it here now – it was a rare moment for Shane to have the apartment to herself. She’d never really minded before but lately things were getting to her. Bette’s home was so beautiful and peaceful and private it made Shane realise what she was missing. This apartment and her friends had once been great but she now felt like she should be moving on. She stared at the ceiling hardly blinking.
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Wow, it’s been so long. Glad you decided to continue. Thia Bette-Shane pairing somehow reminds me of Brian and Justin in QAF. The difference is Brian is a dude, while Bette has(had?) Tina. It’s quite difficult to choose who would get hurt between Tina and Shane. But I feel like Bette and Tina would last longer than Bette and Shane.
smoking hottht was sizzlingyou really did a great job
I’m glad you posted!!! I really love this story… please don’t let us wait too long before another chapter ok?!Great job!!!
Wow…this is sooo wrong but sooo hot. Bette can’t have both. Does she REALLY love Tina? She sure not acting like it…maybe she needs to be single until she can “keep it in her pants.” I like this story though…
not a good storyline – kinda of silly cant imagine where this is going
I have always thought that Shane and Bette would be hot together for a short term thing, because they do care so much for each other, and this started out good, but this is wrong. Bette would never treat Shane like this, like a prostitute.
You do capture their raw passion and the sex is hot and animalistic. Maybe sex w/Tina is too wifely and Bette needs cold, hard f*cking. It is a fantasy.
This story is awesome! Theres not many bette and shane stories out there so i was surprised to find this. I hope you post again. Theres still the first date between them and tina finding out! Please post soon! :)
My, my, my! Well worth the wait! Please continue quickly; this is so intriguing! Thanks for the post.
it’s been a long time coming but it worth it. I am happy to see Bette and Shane together…for me with Tina…it’s over. With Shane it can be quite interesting to see how the relation will go. For now it’s very hard but perhaps they will find a way to go together. I will like that very much. This story is a good change. Thanks and update soon please.
Incredibly hot chapter!! Nice job.Bette has some major issues to work out. She has all these feelings for other women, but still wants Tina back. She’ll never be able to do it, this has got to get out of her system before she goes back to Tina. IF Tina will have her, I’m sure Alice has spilled the beans.
that was hot! i love bette and shane together. the stud and the alpha. plese don’t wait too long to post. I can’t wait to see what Tina does when she finds out.
So happy to see you resurface with an awesome update. I hope you won’t make us wait so long for the next one. Welcome back!
YES! I just found your story, but this is exactly what I’ve been looking for, for a whileeee… Um, please keep it Shane/Bette? Oh, and make Bette slap herself for hurting Shane. Great update
Well this is a new spin, but it’s interesting and I like it. I always felt like Bette and Shane had a special connection b/c they were so alike in so many ways. They are both HOT, independent, strong willed and neither is big on opening up about their feelings (yet they can open up to one another). Bette really has herself in a bind now. Shane has fallen for her and wants to be w/ her, but Bette still has some feelings for Tina (though she isn’t sure what they are). I think Bette just doesn’t want to be committed right now-she probably wants the free dom to sleep w/ Tina, Shane and anyone else that crosses her path w/ out having to be apologetic about it. I’ll keep an eye out for the next chapter.