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    Pyromance 13

    Story written on July 28, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Outside the frame, is what we’re leaving out. You won’t remember anyway…..

     

     

     

    She whispered in my ear. She whispered something that I don’t think they picked up with the mic’s.

     

     

     

    “I am sorry…..and I think that I am in love with you….” Her lips touch my ear then my neck. I look at her and I wonder why she said that to me. Alice yells into her mega phone and it startles me.

     

     

     

    “And……..Action…….!”

     

     

     

    I was supposed to read my lines. But I can’t not be anything but shocked…..Carmen gently nudged me into attention.

     

     

     

     

    “……..Oh Ramona…..why didn’t I meet you in a better part of my life?”  Kisses on her neck. Her nails lightly scratching my back.

     

     

     

    “Life is just life…..and this is the night…….why don’t you touch me……we can get much closer.”

     

     

     

     

    “Yes we can…….shit……..What’s the line?”

     

     

     

    “Cut! Yes we can…..I wanna be with you……” Alice said.

     

     

     

    “Thanks…sorry……”

     

     

     

    “No problem it was going great….Ok………take it from the top….and Shane get closer to Carmen…..like a pretzel…..Yeah that’s it…..I want you tangled in her….ok places….on my mark………and…..action……..”

     

     

     

    “Ramona…….why didn’t I meet you…earlier…..at a better time in my life?” Kiss on her lips, her throat, soft moan escaping her. She did that thing where she held my face in her hands and we keep kissing unscripted and intense. No one said cut so we kept going. Carmen pushed me down on the mattress. I could hear the confusion as the camera matched our pace. It was getting dangerous and over the line yet Alice still didn’t yell cut. I kissed her till everything in me hurt and I pushed her away when I felt that grind on me….

     

     

     

    “Ramona?”

     

     

     

    “Oh god….Sandy…its just life…..and this is the night…we don’t meet and we don’t feel…..and if we don’t feel. Oh god…I need you to touch me…..I want you touch me…..I don’t care about anything else……”

     

     

     

     

    “I wanna be with you…..but I don’t know you….and you don’t know me……”

     

     

     

    It was venom in my voice….and it was a scared look in her eye. Oh yes we where tangled all right. And I got up and grabbed my robe and walked off the set. I stormed past everyone bare foot and bare assed under my robe and slammed my trailer door shut. Sitting in the dark with no sound. I searched around for my smokes and lit one just as Alice banged on my door. I walked over and opened the door. She was yelling into her walkie talkie that she found me in my trailer. She was super pissed off. She took a moment to really look at me then took a deep breath.

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    1. “Either way I wanted to fix it so she would be the only woman I would ever have again.” I love this sentence ! Your story is awesome, I can’t wait to read what happens next – although I think it would have been interesting to see how Shane manages the “breakup” with Carmen. Anyway pps

    3. Wow that was heavy! You were awesome. I always check out the site to sede if you updated this fic. It’s great! More please. (Your writing comes with a kind of seriousness that “stabs.” I’ve been following your works since sharmenonline.com. Cheers!

    6. I’m kind of torn over how they made up…while I can understand why Shane would feel like she couldn’t really be mad at Carmen for things she herself did, it just seemed too easy for them. Like if Alice hadn’t forced them to make up for the sake of filming, would they still have talked it out, or would Shane still be furious and disgusted? You mention that Carmen and Shane are going to meet up after shooting to have a meal and hash things out, so I guess I’ll just wait and see if everything is really all settled and forgiven…I still loved the chapter!

    7. “… and is sponsered by the letter E” -Your comment made me think of Sesame Street – LOL, Cute. Shane running out during filming def. alerted the crew to her relationship w/ Carmen. That was kind of embarrassing to have happened on a movie set, hell it made me cringe. Can’t wait to see where this goes. Check out the sites in Hawaii if you get a chance, you have enough time to plan how. Luv the update.

    8. tear…. man… im crying.. i get so fucking into your story they are gonna kill me!! still…. man im in love with does 2 i just love the drama here so different yet so cool!! keep up the good work, but then again i dont have to tell you that lol

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