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Pyromance 14
Pyromance 14
Part Four
“So how did you meet?” I ask with my mouth full of steak and peppers.
Carmen sits across from me in her nice warm kitchen. It’s close to three in the morning and we have work in three hours. We spent the whole day naked in each others arms. Real sweat pouring from our veins. Real kisses that left me feeling like jelly. Real want, rather a need to make her feel good. It’s an amazing thing to fake something we are so good at.
Yet that’s what we did. After our characters met in the strip club, Carmen’s character, Ramona invites my character to her shitty apartment. We talk a little about our dreams, and wants (we haven’t filmed that yet) fears. Ramona is drawn to Sandy. And then the fireworks begin.
So we started the scene over clothed at first. We flirt, we tease. It’s not hard to. We enjoy it. We break for lunch, which of course we where forced to have with Alice to play catch up with everything that has been going on. We watched as Alice showed more and more how little patience she has, yet at the same time how fucking smart she is. The thing we all…cast and crew alike, the thing we all began to notice is that Alice knows exactly how far to push to people without driving them away. She didn’t make us do twenty takes. She told exactly what we needed and what she wanted from the scene and it went off flawlessly.
Lunch was over and then it was back to work and back to being naked again. It was a little easier. But not by much. We filmed fake sex and it was seriously surreal. Her hands on me getting so close yet not touching me. After a while like maybe the second time we didn’t really notice everyone else. We just felt each other without feeling. It was wild. We kissed for all the world to see. Laying there flat on the bed with her on top me it wasn’t difficult to make her mine. There was not any pressure to get it right. We knew how to kiss, we knew how to touch. And when the scene was over when we faked the last three minutes of what was supposed to be earth shattering sex….I needed a smoke.
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…I have been away so I couldn’t take advantage of being able to comment on the wonderful story you have provided for our reading pleasure…and now..with that being said…THE JAFFENATOR!!!!absolute gold my friend…cheers your conclusion (and possibly the update of your other stories) is anxiously awaited…
Hey there dudette. Great chapter. I don’t mind at all you wrapping it up provided you start another as you promise, lol. I hope it’s Shane centric as usual and I’m really up for some drama if you are.
jeeez newdawn, too cool, once again. i’ve been way behind on my reading, so i apologize for my lack of comments. i must admit, you’re dystopic musings have inspired me in my ridiculous post apocalyptic Planet Terror story…just thought i should tell you that the tone of your work is definately something that i try to play up in my own. very good as always. pps
fantastic! I was really in love with this chapter! But I guess something beg is going to come soon…
I a will be sad to see this story go. Great chapter!
Any doubts I may have had after the last chapter have been appeased…as I deep down knew they would be. Despite the fatalistic love between Shane and Carmen I had an uneasy feeling about Carmen’s intentions when the history with Cherie was revealed. Now I can happily go back to waiting for the conclusion of this story and the beginning of the next…Cyber freak out averted.
Great discussion between the characters. Good job!