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Pyromance 14
“No. I don’t think that.”
“Then what do you think?”
“Honestly?”
“There isn’t any other way is there?”
“No I suppose not….I think about bringing you home to meet my family. I think about big family dinners away from all this fake shit all around us, I think about taking you to my room and listening to music and reading parts of my favorite books, I think about buying little surprise presents just for smiling at me, I think about walking down the red carpet premiere for our movie and every fucking asshole taking our picture and eating their hearts out because you are mine. I think about helping you get on with your life, I think about maybe some other things that I don’t want to say for fear that you are stripping me of my soul…..and it’s dramatic and pathetic but that’s love or so they say.”
Something was digging itself into her. Something she couldn’t deny. I was getting to her. Maybe I already got to her………
“To answer your question. I don’t give a fuck about what anyone thinks about me or you or me with you. They didn’t know me or Bruce. They only know what they can program, what they can shape and twist into their own form. As for what I feel for you, I don’t have the words half the time. you make it hard to think and feel and breathe things that aren’t you, you leave me and I feel sad, you are here and I feel sad because I can’t not focus on you, and honestly I am afraid. Afraid because my feelings where already intense when it came to you. And now with Bruce being gone….everything is just below the surface of me. I don’t know anything……can I promise you the future? God I wish I could. Do I love the idea of your vision of us? Its so perfect, but I will not lie to you again, I love you and I am afraid that being in love with you is somehow wrapped in my feeling or my lack of feeling for what I did to him and to us.”
I take her hand in mine for some reason. Something to make her feel better. Something to make her feel me? Something to take the burning truth of her words out of my stomach.
To be concluded…..
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…I have been away so I couldn’t take advantage of being able to comment on the wonderful story you have provided for our reading pleasure…and now..with that being said…THE JAFFENATOR!!!!absolute gold my friend…cheers your conclusion (and possibly the update of your other stories) is anxiously awaited…
Hey there dudette. Great chapter. I don’t mind at all you wrapping it up provided you start another as you promise, lol. I hope it’s Shane centric as usual and I’m really up for some drama if you are.
jeeez newdawn, too cool, once again. i’ve been way behind on my reading, so i apologize for my lack of comments. i must admit, you’re dystopic musings have inspired me in my ridiculous post apocalyptic Planet Terror story…just thought i should tell you that the tone of your work is definately something that i try to play up in my own. very good as always. pps
fantastic! I was really in love with this chapter! But I guess something beg is going to come soon…
I a will be sad to see this story go. Great chapter!
Any doubts I may have had after the last chapter have been appeased…as I deep down knew they would be. Despite the fatalistic love between Shane and Carmen I had an uneasy feeling about Carmen’s intentions when the history with Cherie was revealed. Now I can happily go back to waiting for the conclusion of this story and the beginning of the next…Cyber freak out averted.
Great discussion between the characters. Good job!