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Pyromance 14
“Benny my man you are a trip……how things been in the meantime?”
“Slow…but you know….we start filming some cool stuff at the end of the week…you know once you get done with your girl and all…”
“Benny….”
“Nah……Shane its cool….you don’t have to explain anything. I know about you and Carmen. Its kind of there you know? Anyway it’s not my business and I think its cool, you kind of beat me to it with her but she is not so inclined these days anyway. Plus she is a little much for me, I like them loose and with very little self esteem if you know what I mean……I’m kidding….no….yeah….plus you too are nice together…..all over each other and all that……so I wont say shit. And I got your back…you are the coolest chick ever…you where next on my list anyway…..”
“Will you get out of here…go work out or something…”
“Won’t have half the workout you do………….later.”
“Yeah later Benny…”
“Oh Shane”
“Yeah?”
“Party at Mark’s house…bring Carmen…along…..Saturday night…..”
“I’ll see……”
“Cool.”
So that wrapped up the day. I didn’t mind Benny knowing he was and is still my best friend. Carmen and I left the set in different cars but we wound up at her place. That same guard waving me in. The night was calm and breezy and quiet. I knocked and she answered wearing nothing but an apron. The door closed and she went for my mouth with hers.
Whispering thoughts of love and devotion in my hair as she unbuttoned my shirt, as she runs hands over my breasts. Off came her apron and with it the visual aide of her body. I love her body, I love her toned, I love her soft. It was so urgent the need to be near her, with her. We fell onto her sofa. Her eyes on mine when I used my fingers to spread her open, that look of satisfaction when I was inside her, her fingers joined me and it was a race to the finish.
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…I have been away so I couldn’t take advantage of being able to comment on the wonderful story you have provided for our reading pleasure…and now..with that being said…THE JAFFENATOR!!!!absolute gold my friend…cheers your conclusion (and possibly the update of your other stories) is anxiously awaited…
Hey there dudette. Great chapter. I don’t mind at all you wrapping it up provided you start another as you promise, lol. I hope it’s Shane centric as usual and I’m really up for some drama if you are.
jeeez newdawn, too cool, once again. i’ve been way behind on my reading, so i apologize for my lack of comments. i must admit, you’re dystopic musings have inspired me in my ridiculous post apocalyptic Planet Terror story…just thought i should tell you that the tone of your work is definately something that i try to play up in my own. very good as always. pps
fantastic! I was really in love with this chapter! But I guess something beg is going to come soon…
I a will be sad to see this story go. Great chapter!
Any doubts I may have had after the last chapter have been appeased…as I deep down knew they would be. Despite the fatalistic love between Shane and Carmen I had an uneasy feeling about Carmen’s intentions when the history with Cherie was revealed. Now I can happily go back to waiting for the conclusion of this story and the beginning of the next…Cyber freak out averted.
Great discussion between the characters. Good job!