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Pyromance 14
“I do….but it wasn’t that bad.” I say half joking. She looked at me like I was an idiot. “I mean it’s good for a laugh.”
“Yeah it is….but I wanted to do things that where out of this world,” she said pointing to the room around us. “Maybe that’s why I got the call for this movie?”
“How did that happen?”
“Well I met Mark around you know…You go to the same places all the time and you run into the same people…and one day I get a call, its Mark and he wants me to read a scene with you….you of all people."
“Shit.”
“Yes….my heart was racing…I was so nervous…and I never get nervous….and there you where…looking so fucking sexy to me…..and that kiss…..man…I thought about it for days…….and here we are.”
“Yes we are. I guess the real question is what’s in this for you?”
“You can’t be serious?”
“Come on Carmen. What do you think is going to happen between us? Do you think are going to live and be accepted and be able to work in this town, can you honestly see yourself with me knowing that everyone will think you drove your boyfriend to kill himself because we slept together?”
She looked at me. And I saw such darkness in her eyes. Something I had never seen before. Something that made me think, it made me think that just because I make her scream and moan and beg for me, just because when we where alone we did things and said things to each other that maybe we wouldn’t have said or done to anyone else….I still didn’t know her and she didn’t know me. She doesn’t answer me at first she instead take a heavy gulp of her wine. And set the glass down rather violently.
“Can I ask you something first…then I’ll answer your question…and rest assured I have a answer this is in no way based on what you are about to say….”
“Sure Carmen…shoot.”
“When we are alone…and it’s just you and me….are you thinking about the future…are you thinking about what everyone thinks? Are you thinking about the idea that I waited and pinned after you only to get out of being with the man that knew me inside out, that knew my heart more than anyone else, that understood when no one else did: how I felt…how I feel about you?”
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…I have been away so I couldn’t take advantage of being able to comment on the wonderful story you have provided for our reading pleasure…and now..with that being said…THE JAFFENATOR!!!!absolute gold my friend…cheers your conclusion (and possibly the update of your other stories) is anxiously awaited…
Hey there dudette. Great chapter. I don’t mind at all you wrapping it up provided you start another as you promise, lol. I hope it’s Shane centric as usual and I’m really up for some drama if you are.
jeeez newdawn, too cool, once again. i’ve been way behind on my reading, so i apologize for my lack of comments. i must admit, you’re dystopic musings have inspired me in my ridiculous post apocalyptic Planet Terror story…just thought i should tell you that the tone of your work is definately something that i try to play up in my own. very good as always. pps
fantastic! I was really in love with this chapter! But I guess something beg is going to come soon…
I a will be sad to see this story go. Great chapter!
Any doubts I may have had after the last chapter have been appeased…as I deep down knew they would be. Despite the fatalistic love between Shane and Carmen I had an uneasy feeling about Carmen’s intentions when the history with Cherie was revealed. Now I can happily go back to waiting for the conclusion of this story and the beginning of the next…Cyber freak out averted.
Great discussion between the characters. Good job!