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    Pyromance 4

    Story written on July 5, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66132
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    Twisted secret lives, the way you bat your eyes…..

     

     

    “Don’t worry about it guys……”

     

     

    “Shane your coming with us right?” Carmen asks.

     

     

    “Sure she is honey…I already took care of it…Shane like seven….that ok with you?”

     

     

     

    “Yeah…it’s ok with me….”

     

     

    Carmen she smiles at me again. I take a deep breath and they used that as cue to go. Bruce helped Carmen out of my bed and they walked by me. Then they walked out. After a while I made my way to my bed…..it smelled like her. I hugged the pillow she slept on and tried not to feel too insane about it. I closed my eyes and I went to sleep for a couple of hours.

     

     

    I was having this very sensual dream. Just hands smoothing my hair from my eyes. Soft lips kissing me. I felt like I was under some kind of spell. There was a knock on my door and I couldn’t make out the face of the person I was kissing.

     

     

    I looked over to my alarm clock and noticed it was 7:30

     

     

    Carmen she comes inside without asking. Just standing there in my make shift living room. She had this black jumpsuit on with a white midriff baring t-shirt, for a second I thought I was still dreaming.  And there it was again. That feeling of wanting to know her. I hide it under the guise of just having woken up. Every time our eyes met she smiled at me. I started to notice that she had been fighting this habit of biting her lip when she caught me looking at her. Really when she caught me scoping her out.

     

     

    Truthful one of us had to say something. But we didn’t. We just stood there trying to desperately ignore that thing….in between us……

     

     

     

    “We where running a little late….and um….I thought you could use some extra sleep….I mean you can sleep in the car….anyway….its time to make the donuts….”

     

     

    We laugh. She is so funny….you wouldn’t think it….but shit…….she was really funny.

     

     

     

    “Is this all you have?” Bruce asks suddenly appeared out of nowhere.

     

     

    “Uh…..yeah…that’s it….just…what you got in you hand…I got the rest thanks.”

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    6. Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D

    7. So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!

    9. ***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.

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